[bess] ID Tracker State Update Notice:

2015-03-12 Thread IETF Secretariat
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[bess] [IANA #812089] Protocol Action: 'Covering Prefixes Outbound Route Filter for BGP-4' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06.txt)

2015-03-12 Thread Amanda Baber via RT
Hi,

It should definitely be pointing at version 06. Here are the corrected versions:

http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters
http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities

We'll replace the draft string when the RFC Editor notifies us that they've 
assigned a number. In the meantime, I'll let them know that the actions are 
complete. 

thanks,
Amanda 

On Thu Mar 12 01:32:18 2015, rbon...@juniper.net wrote:
> Hi Amanda,
> 
> I have two questions.
> 
> The latest version of draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering prefixes is 06.
> Your reference is RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03. Does that
> make a difference?
> 
> Also, I assume that this string will be replaced with an RFC number
> when one is assigned. Is that right?
> 
> Otherwise, it looks OK.
> 
> Ron
> 
> 
> > -Original Message-
> > From: Amanda Baber via RT [mailto:drafts-appro...@iana.org]
> > Sent: Wednesday, March 11, 2015 6:32 PM
> > Cc: draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes@tools.ietf.org
> > Subject: [IANA #812089] Protocol Action: 'Covering Prefixes Outbound
> > Route
> > Filter for BGP-4' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-
> > prefixes-
> > 06.txt)
> >
> > Dear Authors:
> >
> > ATTENTION: A RESPONSE TO THIS MESSAGE IS NEEDED
> >
> > We've completed the IANA Actions for the following RFC-to-be:
> >
> > draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06
> >
> > ACTION 1:
> >
> > IANA has updated the reference for the following BGP Outbound Route
> > Filtering (ORF) Type:
> >
> > 65CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]
> >
> > Please see
> > http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters
> >
> >
> > ACTION 2:
> >
> > IANA has updated the reference for the following Transitive Opaque
> > Extended Community Sub-Type:
> >
> > 0x03  CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]
> >
> > Please see
> > http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities
> >
> >
> > Please let us know whether the above IANA Actions look OK. As soon as
> > we
> > receive your confirmation, we'll notify the RFC Editor that this
> > document's
> > IANA Actions are complete. (If this document has a team of authors,
> > one
> > reply on behalf of everyone will suffice.)
> >
> > We'll update the reference when the RFC Editor notifies us that
> > they've
> > assigned a number.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Amanda Baber
> > IANA Request Specialist
> > ICANN
> 



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[bess] [IANA #812089] Protocol Action: 'Covering Prefixes Outbound Route Filter for BGP-4' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06.txt)

2015-03-12 Thread Amanda Baber via RT
Dear Authors:

ATTENTION: A RESPONSE TO THIS MESSAGE IS NEEDED 

We've completed the IANA Actions for the following RFC-to-be:

draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06

ACTION 1:

IANA has updated the reference for the following BGP Outbound Route Filtering 
(ORF) Type:

65  CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]

Please see
http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters


ACTION 2:

IANA has updated the reference for the following Transitive Opaque Extended 
Community Sub-Type:

0x03CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]

Please see
http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities


Please let us know whether the above IANA Actions look OK. As soon as we 
receive your confirmation, we'll notify the RFC Editor that this document's 
IANA Actions are complete. (If this document has a team of authors, one reply 
on behalf of everyone will suffice.)

We'll update the reference when the RFC Editor notifies us that they've 
assigned a number.

Thanks,

Amanda Baber
IANA Request Specialist
ICANN

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Re: [bess] [IANA #812089] Protocol Action: 'Covering Prefixes Outbound Route Filter for BGP-4' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06.txt)

2015-03-12 Thread Ronald Bonica
Hi Amanda,

I have two questions.

The latest version of draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering prefixes is 06. Your 
reference is RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03. Does that make a 
difference?

Also, I assume that this string will be replaced with an RFC number when one is 
assigned. Is that right?

Otherwise, it looks OK.

 Ron


> -Original Message-
> From: Amanda Baber via RT [mailto:drafts-appro...@iana.org]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 11, 2015 6:32 PM
> Cc: draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: [IANA #812089] Protocol Action: 'Covering Prefixes Outbound Route
> Filter for BGP-4' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-
> 06.txt)
> 
> Dear Authors:
> 
> ATTENTION: A RESPONSE TO THIS MESSAGE IS NEEDED
> 
> We've completed the IANA Actions for the following RFC-to-be:
> 
> draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-06
> 
> ACTION 1:
> 
> IANA has updated the reference for the following BGP Outbound Route
> Filtering (ORF) Type:
> 
> 65CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]
> 
> Please see
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters
> 
> 
> ACTION 2:
> 
> IANA has updated the reference for the following Transitive Opaque
> Extended Community Sub-Type:
> 
> 0x03  CP-ORF  [RFC-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes-03]
> 
> Please see
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities
> 
> 
> Please let us know whether the above IANA Actions look OK. As soon as we
> receive your confirmation, we'll notify the RFC Editor that this document's
> IANA Actions are complete. (If this document has a team of authors, one
> reply on behalf of everyone will suffice.)
> 
> We'll update the reference when the RFC Editor notifies us that they've
> assigned a number.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Amanda Baber
> IANA Request Specialist
> ICANN

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[bess] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-03.txt

2015-03-12 Thread Ben Niven-Jenkins
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The 
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as 
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special 
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. 
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see 
​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would 
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call 
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by 
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-03.txt
Reviewer: Ben Niven-Jenkins
Review Date: 11th March 2015
IETF LC End Date: Not known 
Intended Status: Standards Track


Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be 
considered prior to publication.

Comments:
The draft is well written, in places I needed to re-read sentences to ensure I 
had understood them but I think this is more to do with the nature of the 
content and that multicast VPNs require complex descriptions rather than a 
reflection on the quality of the document.

Major issues:
No major issues found.

Minor issues:
No minor issues found.

Nits:
Section 1.1: C-multicast flow:
Change
  If a customer uses the "Any Source Multicast" (ASM) model, the
  some or all of the customer's C-flows may be traveling along the

to

  If a customer uses the "Any Source Multicast" (ASM) model, then
  some or all of the customer's C-flows may be traveling along the

i.e. s/the/then in the first line.

Section 1.2.4:
s/If a bidirectional P-tunnels/If bidirectional P-tunnels/

s/The method used by a given VRF used is determined/The method used by a given 
VRF is determined/

Section 3.2.2:
s/The PEs are REQUIRED to originate these routes are/The PEs REQUIRED to 
originate these routes are/

s/This document assumes that the root node address of an MP2MP LSP an IP 
address/This document assumes that the root node address of an MP2MP LSP is an 
IP address/

Section 3.2.4 states:

 In order to be compliant with this specification, an implementation
 that provides bidirectional P-tunnels MUST support one or both of the
 two P-tunnel technologies mentioned in section Section 1.2.1.

Saying implementations "MUST support one or both" sounds a bit strange to me 
and something like "MUST support at least one" sounds better (but both 
ultimately mean the same thing)?

Also the document states:

 A PE that does not provide C-BIDIR support using the "partitioned set
 of PEs" method may be deemed compliant to this specification if it
 supports the Unpartitioned Method, using either MP2MP LSPs or BIDIR-
 PIM multicast distribute trees as P-tunnels.

"may be deemed" implies there are cases where it "may not be deemed" compliant 
but I'm not sure what those are.

Do you really mean to say "is" instead of "may be"?




Regards
Ben

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[bess] ID Tracker State Update Notice:

2015-03-12 Thread IETF Secretariat
IANA action state changed to In Progress
ID Tracker URL: 
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[bess] ID Tracker State Update Notice:

2015-03-12 Thread IETF Secretariat
IANA action state changed to Waiting on RFC Editor
ID Tracker URL: 
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-orf-covering-prefixes/

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