Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates

2017-08-05 Thread Guillem Jover 
Hi!

On Sun, 2017-07-23 at 23:33:46 +0200, Holger Wansing wrote:
> Control: tags -1 + pending

> Guillem Jover  wrote:
> > The typo fix got fixed independently now. The reset still applies, and
> > I've split it into logical patches, and added some more corrections,
> > namely:
> > 
> >  * Switch URLs to new canonical addresses and https.
> >  * Update apt frontend command usage.
> > 
> > > Note that I've not build-tested it, as the Build-Depends where quite big.
> > 
> > This still applies.
> > 
> > > And sorry for bundling this in a single patch, but splitting it with svn
> > > is rather painful, but I could do that if you wanted though.
> > 
> > And for this I ended up using git-svn. :)

> > [0001-Use-Debian-instead-of-kernel-specific-references.patch (text/x-diff, 
> > attachment)]
> > 
> > [0002-List-dpkg-V-instead-of-debsums.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]
> > 
> > [0003-Update-links.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]
> > 
> > [0004-Update-for-new-apt-frontend.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]
> 
> 
> Now fixed in git. Thanks!

Thanks, although I see any kind of attribution has been lost in the
way. :/

To preserve proper attribution of someone elses patches when using
git you can use «git am *.patch» or when applying manually with say
«git apply some.patch» and then doing for example
«git commit -a --author 'Someone Else '».

Regards,
Guillem

Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates

2017-07-23 Thread Holger Wansing 
Control: tags -1 + pending


Guillem Jover  wrote:
> The typo fix got fixed independently now. The reset still applies, and
> I've split it into logical patches, and added some more corrections,
> namely:
> 
>  * Switch URLs to new canonical addresses and https.
>  * Update apt frontend command usage.
> 
> > Note that I've not build-tested it, as the Build-Depends where quite big.
> 
> This still applies.
> 
> > And sorry for bundling this in a single patch, but splitting it with svn
> > is rather painful, but I could do that if you wanted though.
> 
> And for this I ended up using git-svn. :)
> 
> Thanks,
> Guillem
> 
> [0001-Use-Debian-instead-of-kernel-specific-references.patch (text/x-diff, 
> attachment)]
> 
> [0002-List-dpkg-V-instead-of-debsums.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]
> 
> [0003-Update-links.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]
> 
> [0004-Update-for-new-apt-frontend.patch (text/x-diff, attachment)]


Now fixed in git. Thanks!


Holger

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Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates

2016-07-16 Thread Guillem Jover 
Hi!

On Wed, 2014-07-02 at 16:03:51 +0200, Guillem Jover wrote:
> Source: refcard
> Source-Version: 5.0.9
> Severity: wishlist
> Tags: patch

> Here's a patch, which fixes a typo, makes the Debian distribution
> references system-neutral now that we have other non-GNU/Linux released
> architectures (although the ip command is Linux-specific), and switches
> the debsums item to use the new native «dpkg -V».

> (The  still has system
> specific references to Debian GNU/Linux.)

The typo fix got fixed independently now. The reset still applies, and
I've split it into logical patches, and added some more corrections,
namely:

 * Switch URLs to new canonical addresses and https.
 * Update apt frontend command usage.

> Note that I've not build-tested it, as the Build-Depends where quite big.

This still applies.

> And sorry for bundling this in a single patch, but splitting it with svn
> is rather painful, but I could do that if you wanted though.

And for this I ended up using git-svn. :)

Thanks,
Guillem
From a2862d4582af7737771d8ce46028b9fb1a1b2175 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Guillem Jover 
Date: Thu, 10 Mar 2016 01:30:42 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Use Debian instead of kernel specific references

---
 entries.dbk |  8 +++-
 refcard.dbk | 11 +--
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/entries.dbk b/entries.dbk
index 9dc1c49..1ee125c 100644
--- a/entries.dbk
+++ b/entries.dbk
@@ -2,13 +2,11 @@
 http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd;>
 
-  
-  DebianGNU/Linux Reference Card
+  
+  Debian Reference Card
   
-  The 101 most important things when using Debian
-  GNU/Linux
+  The 101 most important things when using Debian
   
 
   2004
diff --git a/refcard.dbk b/refcard.dbk
index ec7de0b..bbf8d01 100644
--- a/refcard.dbk
+++ b/refcard.dbk
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
 http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd;>
 
-  DebianGNU/Linux Reference Card
-  The 101 most important things when using Debian
-  GNU/Linux
+  Debian Reference Card
+  The 101 most important things when using Debian
   
 
   
 
   The idea of this reference card is to provide new users of
-  Debian GNU/Linux with the most important commands.  Basic (or
+  Debian with the most important commands.  Basic (or
   better) knowledge of computers, files, directories and the
   command line is required.  Some acronyms related to Debian
-  GNU/Linux can be found here.
+  can be found here.
 
   
   
@@ -985,7 +984,7 @@
 
   
   
-Acronyms related to Debian GNU/Linux
+Acronyms related to Debian
 
 
   From aa570a0d43e614ace96a37e6af7f07d6fd618698 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Guillem Jover 
Date: Thu, 10 Mar 2016 01:30:52 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/4] List dpkg -V instead of debsums

This option appearing in dpkg 1.17.2, present in Debian jessie.
---
 entries.dbk | 9 +
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/entries.dbk b/entries.dbk
index 1ee125c..bbfcdde 100644
--- a/entries.dbk
+++ b/entries.dbk
@@ -502,10 +502,11 @@
 	pkg.deb
 	Install package files.
   
-  
-	debsums
-	Audit check sums of installed packages, needs
-	debsums.
+  
+	dpkg -V
+	names
+	Audit check sums of installed
+	packages.
   
   
 	dpkg-divert options
-- 
2.8.1

From d2af06a10dbfe5e1853b145b1a631f2c1d6db112 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Guillem Jover 
Date: Thu, 10 Mar 2016 01:30:55 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Update links

Switch http: to https:, remove dead links, and update VCS links to
canonical URLs.
---
 dblatex.xsl|  2 +-
 debian/control |  4 ++--
 entries.dbk| 32 
 refcard.dbk| 11 ---
 4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diff --git a/dblatex.xsl b/dblatex.xsl
index 671c41e..1d1e1c4 100644
--- a/dblatex.xsl
+++ b/dblatex.xsl
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 {\scriptsize \DBKcopyright \\
 
-: \url{http://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals#refcard}};
+: \url{https://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals#refcard}};
 \end{minipage}
   
 
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 08737e4..6835d61 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ Build-Depends: cdbs,
xmlroff,
xsltproc
 Vcs-Svn: svn://anonscm.debian.org/ddp/manuals/trunk/refcard
-Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/ddp/manuals/trunk/refcard/
-Homepage: http://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals#refcard
+Vcs-Browser: https://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/ddp/manuals/trunk/refcard/
+Homepage: https://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals#refcard
 
 Package: debian-refcard
 Architecture: all
diff --git a/entries.dbk b/entries.dbk
index bbfcdde..4affe22 100644
--- a/entries.dbk
+++ b/entries.dbk
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
   This document may be used under the terms of the GNU General
   Public License version 3 or

Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates

2014-07-03 Thread Stuart Prescott 
 and switches
 the debsums item to use the new native «dpkg -V».

should we wait for this to be available in a stable release prior to 
advertising it widely?

$ dpkg -V
dpkg: error: unknown option -V

but the refcard told me!!1!

(of course, this update might not get uploaded until some time during the 
jessie freeze anyway)

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Bug#753492: refcard: Typo, wording and item updates

2014-07-02 Thread Guillem Jover 
Source: refcard
Source-Version: 5.0.9
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

Hi!

Here's a patch, which fixes a typo, makes the Debian distribution
references system-neutral now that we have other non-GNU/Linux released
architectures (although the ip command is Linux-specific), and switches
the debsums item to use the new native «dpkg -V».

(The https://www.debian.org/doc/user-manuals still has system
specific references to Debian GNU/Linux.)

Note that I've not build-tested it, as the Build-Depends where quite big.
And sorry for bundling this in a single patch, but splitting it with svn
is rather painful, but I could do that if you wanted though.

Thanks,
Guillem
Index: entries.dbk
===
--- entries.dbk	(revision 10420)
+++ entries.dbk	(working copy)
@@ -2,13 +2,11 @@
 !DOCTYPE article PUBLIC -//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN
 http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd;
 article lang=en-GB
-  !-- This file is the translatable part of the Debian GNU/Linux
-   Reference Card. --
-  titleDebian#x00A0;GNU/Linux Reference Card/title
+  !-- This file is the translatable part of the Debian Reference Card. --
+  titleDebian Reference Card/title
   !-- subtitle not on printed card, but as 'pdfsubject' in the PDF
file --
-  subtitleThe 101 most important things when using Debian
-  GNU/Linux/subtitle
+  subtitleThe 101 most important things when using Debian/subtitle
   articleinfo
 copyright
   year2004/year
@@ -501,10 +499,11 @@
 	replaceablepkg/replaceable.deb/glossterm
 	glossdefparaInstall package files./para/glossdef
   /glossentry
-  glossentry id=debsums
-	glosstermdebsums/glossterm
-	glossdefparaAudit check sums of installed packages, needs
-	literaldebsums/literal./para/glossdef
+  glossentry id=dpkg-verify
+	glosstermdpkg -V/glossterm
+	optionalreplaceablenames/replaceable/optional/glossterm
+	glossdefparaAudit check sums of installed
+	packages./para/glossdef
   /glossentry
   glossentry id=dpkg-divert
 	glosstermdpkg-divert optionaloptions/optional
Index: refcard.dbk
===
--- refcard.dbk	(revision 10420)
+++ refcard.dbk	(working copy)
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
 !DOCTYPE article PUBLIC -//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN
 http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd;
 article lang=en-GB
-  titleDebian#x00A0;GNU/Linux Reference Card/title
-  subtitleThe 101 most important things when using Debian
-  GNU/Linux/subtitle
+  titleDebian Reference Card/title
+  subtitleThe 101 most important things when using Debian/subtitle
   articleinfo
 corpauthor
   ulink
@@ -240,10 +239,10 @@
 /keywordset
 abstract
   paraThe idea of this reference card is to provide new users of
-  Debian GNU/Linux with the most important commands.  Basic (or
+  Debian with the most important commands.  Basic (or
   better) knowledge of computers, files, directories and the
   command line is required.  Some acronyms related to Debian
-  GNU/Linux can be found link linkend=acronymshere/link./para
+  can be found link linkend=acronymshere/link./para
 /abstract
   /articleinfo
   section id=availability
@@ -872,7 +871,7 @@
 not, try again./para
 
 paraOf course, you may alter the reference card to you needs and
-create a cusomised refcard.  You need to commandapt-get
+create a customised refcard.  You need to commandapt-get
 install/command the following packages first:
 literaldocbook-xsl/literal,
 literalpdfjam/literal,
@@ -936,7 +935,7 @@
 /warning
   /section
   section id=acronyms
-titleAcronyms related to Debian GNU/Linux/title
+titleAcronyms related to Debian/title
 
 simplelist
   memberulink