Re: [dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
Thanks for the review, Bob. On 4/28/2022 6:02 AM, Bob Harold wrote: On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 4:57 AM wrote: A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/ Diff from previous version: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12 IETF Secretariat. Minor nits: In 5.1.1. Draft Version Identification In the example "doq-i00" Where does the "i" come from? I was expecting "doq-00". That was introduced a long time ago, to differentiate between this draft and the incompatible encodings used in the individual draft draft-huitema-dprive-dnsoquic. The whole section 5.1.1 where this is defined is provisional, and will be removed before RFC publication. 5.5. Session Resumption and 0-RTT Next to last paragraph, "errros" -> "errors" 6.3. Address Validation The end of the first paragraph "to a factor 3." -> "to a factor of 3." The draft is now in the hands of the RFC editors. I trust them, but I will verify that these issues are fixed. -- Christian Huitema ___ dns-privacy mailing list dns-privacy@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
Re: [dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 4:57 AM wrote: > > A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt > > > The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/ > > Diff from previous version: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12 > > IETF Secretariat. > > Minor nits: In 5.1.1. Draft Version Identification In the example "doq-i00" Where does the "i" come from? I was expecting "doq-00". 5.5. Session Resumption and 0-RTT Next to last paragraph, "errros" -> "errors" 6.3. Address Validation The end of the first paragraph "to a factor 3." -> "to a factor of 3." -- Bob Harold ___ dns-privacy mailing list dns-privacy@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
[dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/ Diff from previous version: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12 IETF Secretariat. ___ dns-privacy mailing list dns-privacy@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy