On Mon, May 4, 2020 at 10:11 AM wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
>
> Title : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators
> Authors : Sara Dickinson
> Benno J. Overeinder
> Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij
> Allison Mankin
> Filename: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt
> Pages : 43
> Date: 2020-05-04
>
> Abstract:
>This document presents operational, policy, and security
>considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to
>offer DNS Privacy services. With these recommendations, the operator
>can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide,
>and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users.
>
>This document also presents a framework to assist writers of a DNS
>Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to DNS Security
>Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice Statements described
>in RFC6841).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
>
>
Thanks for the update. Some comments.
7.1.1. Definition of the Trust model
"overtime" > "over time"
7.1.2. Trust Model Bootstrapping
The whole first paragraph is difficult to parse - it does not seem like
complete sentences.
7.2.2. Automated Trust Anchor Check
"to to" > "to"
But the sentence does not seem complete.
--
Bob Harold
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