Re: GNOME 3.22 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 1

[Bastian Ilso]

Hi!


Thank you very much for the feedback, check the feedback section for my 
replies. I updated the manuscript based on your suggestions. :-)


https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo


-Bastian

On Fri, Sep 9, 2016 at 7:31 , Nuritzi Sanchez 
 wrote:

Hey Bastian,

Great job, as always! I've added some suggestions and questions at 
the bottom of the wiki page 
(https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo).


Thanks for all your effort on this - I can't wait to see it! :)

Best,
Nuritzi

On Tue, Sep 6, 2016 at 5:06 AM, Bastian Ilso 
 wrote:

Hi everyone,


I need your input on the 3.22 Release Video manuscript. You can read 
it here:

https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo


We reach out to ~100,000 viewers, let's strongly consider what we 
show:
- Is there something about the release you think we should cover 
better?

- Is there something taking too much narrator time?
- Do you have suggestions for music (for CC-BY-SA 4.0)?


My thoughts on what the video should cover:
 - Emphasize our values: being the modern, bleeding-edge, 
community-powered, free and open desktop.
 - Talk about the technological advancements we are making (fx 
sandboxing/distribution), but keep it on a high level.
 - Show highlights of the new application features, thank our 
contributors.
 - Make a call for new contributors towards the end, they can help 
us make a difference.



Feel free to:
1) Edit the manuscript as you wish.
2) Reply with feedback in this thread.
3) Reply with feedback on the wiki page.


Your input is very valuable, I expect to finish the manuscript by 
Sunday the 11th. Thank you so much!


-Bastian

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Re: GNOME 3.22 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 1

[Nuritzi Sanchez]

Hey Bastian,

Great job, as always! I've added some suggestions and questions at the
bottom of the wiki page (
https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo).

Thanks for all your effort on this - I can't wait to see it! :)

Best,
Nuritzi

On Tue, Sep 6, 2016 at 5:06 AM, Bastian Ilso 
wrote:

> Hi everyone,
>
>
> I need your input on the 3.22 Release Video manuscript. You can read it
> here:
> https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo
>
>
> We reach out to ~100,000 viewers, let's strongly consider what we show:
> - Is there something about the release you think we should cover better?
> - Is there something taking too much narrator time?
> - Do you have suggestions for music (for CC-BY-SA 4.0)?
>
>
> My thoughts on what the video should cover:
>  - Emphasize our values: being the modern, bleeding-edge,
> community-powered, free and open desktop.
>  - Talk about the technological advancements we are making (fx
> sandboxing/distribution), but keep it on a high level.
>  - Show highlights of the new application features, thank our contributors.
>  - Make a call for new contributors towards the end, they can help us make
> a difference.
>
>
> Feel free to:
> 1) Edit the manuscript as you wish.
> 2) Reply with feedback in this thread.
> 3) Reply with feedback on the wiki page.
>
>
> Your input is very valuable, I expect to finish the manuscript by Sunday
> the 11th. Thank you so much!
>
> -Bastian
>
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GNOME 3.22 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 1

[Bastian Ilso]

Hi everyone,


I need your input on the 3.22 Release Video manuscript. You can read it 
here:

https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo


We reach out to ~100,000 viewers, let's strongly consider what we show:
- Is there something about the release you think we should cover better?
- Is there something taking too much narrator time?
- Do you have suggestions for music (for CC-BY-SA 4.0)?


My thoughts on what the video should cover:
- Emphasize our values: being the modern, bleeding-edge, 
community-powered, free and open desktop.
- Talk about the technological advancements we are making (fx 
sandboxing/distribution), but keep it on a high level.
- Show highlights of the new application features, thank our 
contributors.
- Make a call for new contributors towards the end, they can help us 
make a difference.



Feel free to:
1) Edit the manuscript as you wish.
2) Reply with feedback in this thread.
3) Reply with feedback on the wiki page.


Your input is very valuable, I expect to finish the manuscript by 
Sunday the 11th. Thank you so much!


-Bastian
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