Thanks Francis. I will address the below nits in the next revision.
Ram
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From: Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
Date: Sunday, 17 May 2015 6:35 pm
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Cc: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun@tools.ietf.org
draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun@tools.ietf.org
Subject: review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt
Resent-From: francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
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Resent-Date: Sunday, 17 May 2015 6:40 pm
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-stun-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150515
IETF LC End Date: 20150513
IESG Telechat date: 20150514??
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed the 06 version.
- 1 page 3: signalling - signaling
- 4.1 page 5: after the terminology section it is recommended to avoid
lower case keywords (e.g., the may in A B2BUA may be in).
- 4.4 page 11: a may and a should...
- authors' addresses pages 13 and 14: India is the full country name,
US the ISO IS 3166 code (the full name is USA). The current rule
is to use 3166 two letter codes, I raised a concern as the UPU
has the opposite rule (full names). Let the RFC Editor to handle this?
Regards
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
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