Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

2014-08-06 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you very much for your review, Robert.

 
 Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document.
 
 The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is
 intended for Proposed Standard.
 There is no protocol definition here, and nothing to progress on the
 standards ladder. This is, instead,
 primarily defining process. Why isn't this being progressed as a BCP?
 The document does two things:
 
 1)It updates some registries for sub-TLVs defined at
 http://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-
 codepoints.xhtml
 As these changes are modifying the format (not the content) of registries
 used by a number of standards track RFCs it needs to be a standards track
 document.
 I don't believe that follows. A BCP could update these documents as well.
 The registries define the codepoints which are sent on the wire by IS-IS 
 implementations. This is absolutely essential for interoperability. I fail 
 to follow your reasoning that a change to such a registry falls into the BCP 
 bucket.
 
 That said, I don't really care about the category - my goal in writing this 
 draft is to satisfy the process requirements to get what amount to editorial 
 changes to the registry done. In this matter I am happy to follow the 
 recommendations from IANA/IESG, Gen-ART, etc. So let's not argue - rather 
 please build consensus with your peers in IANA/IESG as well as the ADs and I 
 will happily agree so long as it accomplishes the original goal.
 Yes - the IESG can steer this at this point.

With regards to the document-as-ps issue, I think we can observe that new or 
changed IANA considerations have been done under various document 
classifications. I personally can not get worked over whether this is a BCP or 
a PS, albeit, as Pete notes, Slightly weird to have this be Standards Track.”. 
I think having the texts clarified as Adrian suggested in his Discuss is 
probably the most worthwhile thing we can do here.

jari



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Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

2014-08-06 Thread Jari Arkko
(Resending due to incorrect e-mail address - please respond to this instead.)

Thank you very much for your review, Robert.

 
 Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document.
 
 The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is
 intended for Proposed Standard.
 There is no protocol definition here, and nothing to progress on the
 standards ladder. This is, instead,
 primarily defining process. Why isn't this being progressed as a BCP?
 The document does two things:
 
 1)It updates some registries for sub-TLVs defined at
 http://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-
 codepoints.xhtml
 As these changes are modifying the format (not the content) of registries
 used by a number of standards track RFCs it needs to be a standards track
 document.
 I don't believe that follows. A BCP could update these documents as well.
 The registries define the codepoints which are sent on the wire by IS-IS 
 implementations. This is absolutely essential for interoperability. I fail 
 to follow your reasoning that a change to such a registry falls into the BCP 
 bucket.
 
 That said, I don't really care about the category - my goal in writing this 
 draft is to satisfy the process requirements to get what amount to editorial 
 changes to the registry done. In this matter I am happy to follow the 
 recommendations from IANA/IESG, Gen-ART, etc. So let's not argue - rather 
 please build consensus with your peers in IANA/IESG as well as the ADs and I 
 will happily agree so long as it accomplishes the original goal.
 Yes - the IESG can steer this at this point.

With regards to the document-as-ps issue, I think we can observe that new or 
changed IANA considerations have been done under various document 
classifications. I personally can not get worked over whether this is a BCP or 
a PS, albeit, as Pete notes, Slightly weird to have this be Standards Track.”. 
I think having the texts clarified as Adrian suggested in his Discuss is 
probably the most worthwhile thing we can do here.

jari


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Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

2014-07-20 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Robert -

 -Original Message-
 From: Isis-wg [mailto:isis-wg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Robert Sparks
 Sent: Sunday, July 20, 2014 7:27 AM
 To: draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoi...@tools.ietf.org; isis...@ietf.org; General
 Area Review Team
 Subject: [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00
 
 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
 Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
 
 http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
 
 Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
 you may receive.
 
 Document: draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00
 Reviewer: Robert Sparks
 Review Date: 20-Jul-2014
 IETF LC End Date: 25-Jul-2014
 IESG Telechat date: 7-Aug-2014
 
 Summary: Basically ready for publication, but with process nits for the
 group and the IESG to consider
 
 Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document.
 
 The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is
 intended for Proposed Standard.
 There is no protocol definition here, and nothing to progress on the
 standards ladder. This is, instead,
 primarily defining process. Why isn't this being progressed as a BCP?

The document does two things:

1)It updates some registries for sub-TLVs defined at 
http://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml

As these changes are modifying the format (not the content) of registries used 
by a number of standards track RFCs it needs to be a standards track document.

2)It defines procedures for early allocation of codepoints from the above 
registry.

While an argument could be made that this portion should be BCP, the fact that 
it is combined with #1 requires that the document be Standards track.

 
 Should this Update any of the RFCs that previously defined these registries?

Yes - it updates the following RFCs: 5130, 5311

   Les

 
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Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

2014-07-20 Thread Robert Sparks


On 7/20/14, 11:04 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

Robert -


-Original Message-
From: Isis-wg [mailto:isis-wg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Robert Sparks
Sent: Sunday, July 20, 2014 7:27 AM
To: draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoi...@tools.ietf.org; isis...@ietf.org; General
Area Review Team
Subject: [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 20-Jul-2014
IETF LC End Date: 25-Jul-2014
IESG Telechat date: 7-Aug-2014

Summary: Basically ready for publication, but with process nits for the
group and the IESG to consider

Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document.

The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is
intended for Proposed Standard.
There is no protocol definition here, and nothing to progress on the
standards ladder. This is, instead,
primarily defining process. Why isn't this being progressed as a BCP?

The document does two things:

1)It updates some registries for sub-TLVs defined at 
http://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml

As these changes are modifying the format (not the content) of registries used 
by a number of standards track RFCs it needs to be a standards track document.

I don't believe that follows. A BCP could update these documents as well.


2)It defines procedures for early allocation of codepoints from the above 
registry.

While an argument could be made that this portion should be BCP, the fact that 
it is combined with #1 requires that the document be Standards track.


Should this Update any of the RFCs that previously defined these registries?

Yes - it updates the following RFCs: 5130, 5311

The  document header (and abstract) should be updated to indicate that.


Les


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