Re: [IETF] IETF, ICANN and Whois (Was Re: Last Call: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01.txt (The Internet Numbers Registry System) to Informational RFC)

2013-06-21 Thread David Farmer

On 6/21/13 10:46 , John Curran wrote:


I believe that policy issues that are under active discussion in
ICANN can also be discussed in the IETF, but there is recognition
that ICANN is likely the more appropriate place to lead the process
of consensus development and approval.

I believe that protocol development that is under active discussion
at the IETF can also discussed at ICANN, but there is recognition
that the IETF is likely the appropriate place to lead the process
of consensus development and approval.

Note that there are lots of things that are neither policy nor
protocols (e.g. operational best practices and guidelines) and
while one can claim that either forum is valid, it really depends
on the particular situation and where those folks who are closest
to the problem actually choose to go with it (and depending on the
protocol, that might not be either of the above...)

/John

Disclaimer: My views alone - YMMV.


A version of these three paragraphs would make an excellent executive 
summary for the 2050bis Draft itself.



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Re: Last Call: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01.txt (The Internet Numbers Registry System) to Informational RFC

2013-05-15 Thread David Farmer

On 5/14/13 13:32 , David Conrad wrote:

Hi,

On May 14, 2013, at 11:02 AM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote:

The third goal you refer to focuses on the need for accurate registration 
information ... in order to meet a variety of operational requirements.  I believe 
this to be a valid technical concerns of the IETF, it is difficult to imagine how a 
global Internet can technically function without this.  So, I think it is important for 
it to remain in the draft.


I would also point out that the third goal makes no statement on whether the 
registration data is publicly available or not.


However, issues of privacy, law enforcement access, and a myriad of other 
extremely important issues related to the Internet Numbers Registry System are 
outside the technical and operational scope of the IETF.  The whole point of 
the draft is to document the issues that are properly the concern of the IETF 
towards the Internet Numbers Registry System and to pass the rest of it to the 
multi-stakeholder environment of ICANN and the RIRs to hash it out.


Exactly. Section 4 notes that provision of public WHOIS has been a technical 
consideration and that it may be necessary for the Internet community to examine these and 
related technical and operational considerations and how best to meet them.


I agree with everything you say above regarding public available of the 
registration data.  However, at the same time Section 7, quoted below, 
makes a very strong argument for it to remain public.


It is generally recognized that accuracy and public availability of 
Internet registry data is often an essential component in researching 
and resolving security and operational issues on the Internet.


So lets play a little hypothetical here;  What if an RIR or ICANN 
through a global policy decided Whois Data no longer should be public 
for overriding privacy reasons.  My read of Section 5, is that would be 
proper path for such a change, and long as the technical guidance of the 
IETF is considered in the process.  But then through RFC 2860 and 
Section 5, if the IETF objected on technical or architectural grounds, 
and formally through the IESG, then the IAB would essentially adjudicate 
the issue.  And ICANN or the RIR are obligated to accept the decision of 
the IAB.  Do I have that right?


To be clear, I'm not advocating Whois should or shouldn't remain public, 
or that anything is wrong with the Section 5.  This just seemed like a 
plausible hypothetical to explore how the puzzle pieces work together to 
make the Internet Numbers Registry System.  Also, I just want to fully 
understand what Section 5 really means.


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Re: Last Call: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01.txt (The Internet Numbers Registry System) to Informational RFC

2013-05-14 Thread David Farmer

On 5/11/13 10:17 , SM wrote:

At 18:36 10-05-2013, David Conrad wrote:

...

 Is it up to the IETF to set up a one-stop shop for personal data
requests?

I suspect not, but I suspect it isn't up to the IETF to dictate global
privacy policy either.


Section 2 is about the goals for distributing number resources (re.
first sentence).  I suggest removing the third goal as it might be a
matter of global (or other) policy.  It also makes privacy a non-issue
as there isn't any relationship between it and the goals.

...

The third goal you refer to focuses on the need for accurate 
registration information ... in order to meet a variety of operational 
requirements.  I believe this to be a valid technical concerns of the 
IETF, it is difficult to imagine how a global Internet can technically 
function without this.  So, I think it is important for it to remain in 
the draft.


However, issues of privacy, law enforcement access, and a myriad of 
other extremely important issues related to the Internet Numbers 
Registry System are outside the technical and operational scope of the 
IETF.  The whole point of the draft is to document the issues that are 
properly the concern of the IETF towards the Internet Numbers Registry 
System and to pass the rest of it to the multi-stakeholder environment 
of ICANN and the RIRs to hash it out.




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Re: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01

2013-04-12 Thread David Farmer

On 4/8/13 13:45 , John Curran wrote:

On Apr 8, 2013, at 9:06 AM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote:


3.  Regarding Public WHOIS in section 4;  The constituencies and stakeholders 
for Public WHOIS are much broader than just the technical community, a number 
of constituencies in civil society have legitimate interests in Public WHOIS.  
I guess the main point I'm trying to make is that Public WHOIS is more than 
just a technical issue, and section 4 seems to scope it as solely a technical 
issue.


It's definitely a bigger issue, but it does not seem appropriate in
an IETF document to assert points about all aspects of the issue, but
instead better to just note the _technical considerations_ of the topic
that are needed to keep the Internet running.


I don't think you need to refocus section 4 from Technical Considerations I 
think simply recognizing that there are more than just technical considerations, 
especially for Public WHOIS, something like the following should be sufficient;

   2) ...have included consideration of the technical and operational
  requirements, as well as requirements of other stakeholders, for
  supporting WHOIS services...


This text would be the authors asserting that these requirements (those of
other stakeholders of Whois) have been considered, and yet there are wide
range of non-technical aspects to Whois that quite probably have not been
fully considered; e.g. issues similar to those in various ongoing discussions
of DNS Whois at ICANN this week...

The section is about the _technical considerations_ that have been considered
in establishment of the Internet Numbers Registry System, and to change the
text as you suggest would significantly expand its scope into areas not 
currently
addressed in the text and not typical of other IETF documents, i.e. problematic.


You are probably right, but the first paragraph of section 4 says;

   As a result of the system of technical standards and guidelines
   established by the IETF as well as historical and operational
   constraints, there have been technical considerations regarding the
   services provided by the Internet Numbers Registry System as it
   evolved.  These technical considerations have included:

Specifically where it says as well as historical and operational 
constraints seems to open the door for what I'm talking about.  The way 
it is written, the historical and seem to stand apart from, separate 
from, or in addition too, the technical standards and guidelines of 
the IETF.  Historical constraints is rather broad and could easily 
include non-technical considerations.  Which the issues of broader 
society and Public WHOIS are certainly some of the historical 
non-technical considerations.


So I'd suggest that paragraph should get some work, to better represent 
the intent you have stated for this section.  I suggest the following 
text, based on my interpretation of what you are saying.  I feel it 
better constrains the discussion to the technical domain.  In particular 
changing historical and operational constraints to something like 
historic operational practices.


   As a result of the system of technical standards and guidelines
   established by the IETF, as well as historic operational
   practices of the Internet community, there are technical
   considerations regarding the services provided by the Internet
   Numbers Registry System, these included:

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Re: draft-housley-rfc2050bis-01

2013-04-08 Thread David Farmer

On 4/7/13 20:34 , Russ Housley wrote:

Many of the comments that were posted to this list have been incorporated.

Please comment on the updated document.


1.  Section 6 and the last paragraph of section 1 are mostly 
duplicative, I'd suggest eliminating section 6 and merging it into the 
last paragraph of section 1.  In particular the part and omits policy 
and operational procedures that have been superseded by ICANN and RIR 
policy since RFC 2050 publication.  That is the only thing in section 6 
that isn't already in the last paragraph of section 1.  Unless you have 
plans to dramatically increase whats in section 6.


2.  Also, the references for RFC 1366 and RFC 1466 are missing.

3.  Regarding Public WHOIS in section 4;  The constituencies and 
stakeholders for Public WHOIS are much broader than just the technical 
community, a number of constituencies in civil society have legitimate 
interests in Public WHOIS.  I guess the main point I'm trying to make is 
that Public WHOIS is more than just a technical issue, and section 4 
seems to scope it as solely a technical issue.


I don't think you need to refocus section 4 from Technical 
Considerations I think simply recognizing that there are more than just 
technical considerations, especially for Public WHOIS, something like 
the following should be sufficient;


   2) ...have included consideration of the technical and operational
  requirements, as well as requirements of other stakeholders, for
  supporting WHOIS services...

Other stakeholders are recognized in general in section 5, but this is a 
little different, this is recognizing while Public WHOIS is a technical 
issue, it is more than just a technical issue.  Whereas Reverse DNS is 
almost entirely a technical issue.


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Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread David Farmer

On 3/20/13 14:04 , John Curran wrote:

On Mar 19, 2013, at 9:30 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote:

I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some suggestions for 
how this is to be accomplished.  Maybe request that future RFCs related to 
these technical and operational considerations include an applicability 
statement as to the Internet Numbers Registry System, either in a separate 
section or maybe as a sub-section of the IANA Considerations.


This evolution is discussed in Section 4.  Maybe a forward pointer is needed.  
Did you not find Section 4 sufficient?


I saw that, it says;

   In addition, in the cases where the IETF sets technical
   recommendations for protocols, practices, or services which are
   directly related to IP address space or AS numbers, such
   recommendations must be taken into consideration in Internet Numbers
   Registry System policy discussions regardless of venue.

This is good, but I read it as saying the IR system, and the RIR's in 
particular, are obligated to consider the technical recommendations of the IETF 
when making policy.  That is only part of the equation.

I was looking for the other side, the IETF is obligated to maintain clear, 
relevant, and up to date technical recommendations for the IR system, including how such 
recommendations are intended to apply to the IR system.


David -

   Two points:

   1) Language along the lines of the IETF is obligated to ... really
  isn't going to work, as the point of the RFC2050 revision is to
  document existing relationships supporting the Internet Numbers
  Registry System, using pointers to existing source documents to
  the greatest extent possible.  Even if there were 100% agreement
  to the concept, it would not be appropriate to establish it via
  this document which is intended for Informational publication.


xxx is obligated to ... wasn't intended as a suggestions for text, but 
like I paraphrased the text from the draft above, and I intended it to 
paraphrase the the text that needs to be added.  The text above quoted 
from the draft such recommendations must be taken into 
consideration... and I agree with that.  I'll note the care in how it 
is worded, but it seems to flow only IETF to IR Sys



   2) More importantly, who is the IETF in such a construct?  Would
  such a task (of periodically pondering if these recommendations
  need updating) fall to the IAB or IESG?  (I hadn't realized that
  they needed extra work... ;-)   I believe that when you consider
  that we each individually are the IETF (i.e. all of the folks
  who participate in the working groups and writing drafts) then
  it is clear that any obligation to update these technical
  recommendations periodically would fall to those with an interest
  in keeping them current.  You might even say that's what Russ,
  David, Geoff, and I are finally getting around to doing via this
  draft, at least for one of the key documents.





FYI,
/John

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Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread David Farmer

Whops, that escaped.  Sorry.

Lets start over.

On 3/20/13 15:51 , David Farmer wrote:

On 3/20/13 14:04 , John Curran wrote:

On Mar 19, 2013, at 9:30 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote:

I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some
suggestions for how this is to be accomplished.  Maybe request that
future RFCs related to these technical and operational
considerations include an applicability statement as to the
Internet Numbers Registry System, either in a separate section or
maybe as a sub-section of the IANA Considerations.


This evolution is discussed in Section 4.  Maybe a forward pointer
is needed.  Did you not find Section 4 sufficient?


I saw that, it says;

   In addition, in the cases where the IETF sets technical
   recommendations for protocols, practices, or services which are
   directly related to IP address space or AS numbers, such
   recommendations must be taken into consideration in Internet Numbers
   Registry System policy discussions regardless of venue.

This is good, but I read it as saying the IR system, and the RIR's in
particular, are obligated to consider the technical recommendations
of the IETF when making policy.  That is only part of the equation.

I was looking for the other side, the IETF is obligated to maintain
clear, relevant, and up to date technical recommendations for the IR
system, including how such recommendations are intended to apply to
the IR system.


David -

   Two points:

   1) Language along the lines of the IETF is obligated to ... really
  isn't going to work, as the point of the RFC2050 revision is to
  document existing relationships supporting the Internet Numbers
  Registry System, using pointers to existing source documents to
  the greatest extent possible.  Even if there were 100% agreement
  to the concept, it would not be appropriate to establish it via
  this document which is intended for Informational publication.


xxx is obligated to ... wasn't intended as a suggestions for text, but 
like I paraphrased the text from the draft above, and I intended it to 
paraphrase the the text that needs to be added.  The text above quoted 
from the draft ...such recommendations must be taken into 
consideration... and I agree with that.  I'll note the care in how it 
is worded, but it seems to flow only from IETF to IR System.


Maybe I'm just being overly sensitive to the must in ...such 
recommendations must be taken into consideration But, it seems to 
me that this says IR System must defer judgements on technical issues to 
the IETFs technical recommendations, even if they are old, crufty, and 
been left in dust by the march of technology.



   2) More importantly, who is the IETF in such a construct?  Would
  such a task (of periodically pondering if these recommendations
  need updating) fall to the IAB or IESG?  (I hadn't realized that
  they needed extra work... ;-)   I believe that when you consider
  that we each individually are the IETF (i.e. all of the folks
  who participate in the working groups and writing drafts) then
  it is clear that any obligation to update these technical
  recommendations periodically would fall to those with an interest
  in keeping them current.  You might even say that's what Russ,
  David, Geoff, and I are finally getting around to doing via this
  draft, at least for one of the key documents.


This is a common problem of community based, we are them they are us, 
type pseudo-organizations.



FYI,
/John

Disclaimers:  My views alone.  If you are reading this email long
after publication, this email may be out-of-date and I do not commit
to updating its contents. ;-)


All I ask is you admit you changed you mind, you have the right to do 
that.  But, when the IETF changes it's mind by changing its consensus, 
then it needs to deprecate its old technical recommendations, or make 
sure everyone else is free to ignore the recommendations.



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Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-19 Thread David Farmer
 of the Internet registry system out of the 
Introduction.  The Intro starts out talking about the document, its 
goals, and what is in scope and out of scope of the document.  Then 
transitions to talking about the goals of the Internet registry system. 
 I think the goals of the Internet registry system should be a separate 
section from the Introduction. And, the Introduction should be expanded 
to better describe the purpose of the document.


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Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread David Farmer
1) In Section 1, goal #2, Hierarchical Allocation, I believe a 
reference the definition in RFC 5226 - Section 4.1.  Well-Known IANA 
Policy Definitions, should be considered.


2) I also wonder if another appropriate goal would be explicitly 
defining the ASN and IP address registries using RFC 5226 language 
including the formal linkage to ICANN and the RIRs as the mechanism for 
IANA to implementing the Hierarchical Allocation of these registries. 
See: RFC 5226, section 4.3. Updating IANA Guidelines for Existing 
Registries


The intention wouldn't be to override RFC 2860, ICANN Policy, or IR 
global policy, but to provide and explicit formal technical definition 
for these registries that really have only been implicitly defined to 
date as far as I can tell.  There are any number of other registries 
that are far less important overall, that have excellent formal 
technical definitions that comply with RFC 5226 or its predecessors. 
However, these our most important registries have no such formal 
technical definitions, I think its really time to fix this situation.


That said, to the greatest extent possible we need a formal technical 
definition compliant with RFC 5226 of the as-is-state, not of the 
want-it-to-be-state.  Or, if I'm incorrect and there are formal 
technical definitions for these registries that comply with RFC 5226, or 
its predecessors, then they should be referenced in this document.


3) The last paragraph of Section 3, Internet Numbers Registry Technical 
Considerations  Says;


   As the Internet and the Internet Numbers Registry System continue to
   evolve, it may be necessary for the Internet community to examine
   these and related technical and operational considerations and how
   best to meet them.

I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some 
suggestions for how this is to be accomplished.  Maybe request that 
future RFCs related to these technical and operational considerations 
include an applicability statement as to the Internet Numbers Registry 
System, either in a separate section or maybe as a sub-section of the 
IANA Considerations.



On 3/16/13 17:13 , Russ Housley wrote:

A new, I-D, draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt, has been posted.  I am writing to 
ask for your review.

Russ


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