[osg-users] License/Legal spelling/grammar

2009-03-24 Thread J.P. Delport

Hi,

I've had to read through the OSG license today and would like to 
contribute some spelling and grammar fixes. It is in no way intented to 
change the terms of the license, so please check.


First up is the page at:
http://www.openscenegraph.org/projects/osg/wiki/Legal

I selected the text alternative format from the page and saved as 
Legal_old.txt. The edited version is named Legal_new.txt, wdiff output 
also attached.


Secondly, the LICENSE.* files contain the changes for the LICENSE.txt 
found in the OSG top dir (it is also attached to the legal wiki page 
mentioned above). I only changed text in the very top part.


regards
jp

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Re: [osg-users] License/Legal spelling/grammar

2009-03-24 Thread J.P. Delport

Hi,

Melchior FRANZ wrote:

* J.P. Delport -- Tuesday 24 March 2009:
I've had to read through the OSG license today and would like to 
contribute some spelling and grammar fixes.


You missed tow licence. From LICENSE_new.txt:


|  of this licence document, but changing it is not allowed.
   ^^^
|   OPENSCENEGRAPH PUBLIC LICENCE
  ^^^


m.  :-)


Mmm, the emacs spell checker did not flag these (wonder why?), but yes, 
I'd suggest to make them license to match the rest of the docs and the 
filename :)


thanks
jp

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Re: [osg-users] License/Legal spelling/grammar

2009-03-24 Thread Robert Osfield
Hi Guys,

Licence is the British spelling as *is* correct.

Robert.

On Tue, Mar 24, 2009 at 2:29 PM, J.P. Delport jpdelp...@csir.co.za wrote:

 Hi,

 Melchior FRANZ wrote:

 * J.P. Delport -- Tuesday 24 March 2009:

 I've had to read through the OSG license today and would like to
 contribute some spelling and grammar fixes.


 You missed tow licence. From LICENSE_new.txt:


 |  of this licence document, but changing it is not allowed.
   ^^^
 |   OPENSCENEGRAPH PUBLIC LICENCE
  ^^^


 m.  :-)


 Mmm, the emacs spell checker did not flag these (wonder why?), but yes, I'd
 suggest to make them license to match the rest of the docs and the
 filename :)

 thanks
 jp

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Re: [osg-users] License/Legal spelling/grammar

2009-03-24 Thread J.P. Delport

No problem,

I didn't say it's wrong, neither did emacs :), but can we at least make 
all uses (those that come from OSG, top part of the file and the wiki 
page) consistent? Do you want to change the filename?. I realise we 
would not change the use in the LGPL e.g.


The spelling of licen{c,s}e was not the main point of the thread though, 
the other errors concern me more.


rgds
jp

Robert Osfield wrote:

Hi Guys,

Licence is the British spelling as *is* correct.

Robert.

On Tue, Mar 24, 2009 at 2:29 PM, J.P. Delport jpdelp...@csir.co.za 
mailto:jpdelp...@csir.co.za wrote:


Hi,

Melchior FRANZ wrote:

* J.P. Delport -- Tuesday 24 March 2009:

I've had to read through the OSG license today and would
like to contribute some spelling and grammar fixes.


You missed tow licence. From LICENSE_new.txt:


|  of this licence document, but changing it is not allowed.
  ^^^
|   OPENSCENEGRAPH PUBLIC LICENCE
 ^^^


m.  :-)


Mmm, the emacs spell checker did not flag these (wonder why?), but
yes, I'd suggest to make them license to match the rest of the
docs and the filename :)

thanks

jp

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