Re: PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[Rick Womer]

Thanks for all the comments—I really do appreciate them. Things have been a bit 
quiet in the critique department here, and it’s good to get feedback from 
people whose opinions I respect (hmmm…).

Another photo posted today; maybe the last of the New Hampshire series.

Rick

> On Sep 17, 2017, at 9:59 PM, Daniel J. Matyola  wrote:
> 
> I also prefer the original.  The bit of shoreline at the top anchors the
> image, and makes it more understandable without destroying the sense of
> mystery.
> 
> Dan Matyola
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
> 
> On Sun, Sep 17, 2017 at 9:17 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
>> After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my
>> eyeballs zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.
>> 
>> Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and
>> shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:
>> 
>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A
>> 
>> 
>> The original:
>> 
>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
>> 
>> 
>> Comments appreciated!
>> 
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[Daniel J. Matyola]

I also prefer the original.  The bit of shoreline at the top anchors the
image, and makes it more understandable without destroying the sense of
mystery.

Dan Matyola
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On Sun, Sep 17, 2017 at 9:17 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:

> After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my
> eyeballs zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.
>
> Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and
> shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:
>
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A
>
>
> The original:
>
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
>
>
> Comments appreciated!
>
> Rick
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[Jack Davis]

Ann, I completely agree and just
withdrew from suggest anything
beyond what your suggest..I think.

J

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> On Sep 17, 2017, at 6:47 PM, ann sanfedele  wrote:
> 
> Well for my eye you chopped off too much at the top... The most I would have 
> taken off is the very top of the light bullrushes .. I think the pads in the 
> water at the top frame the rest nicely..
> 
> ann
> 
>> On 9/17/2017 9:17 PM, Rick Womer wrote:
>> After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my 
>> eyeballs zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.
>> 
>> Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and 
>> shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:
>> 
>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A
>> 
>> 
>> The original:
>> 
>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
>> 
>> 
>> Comments appreciated!
>> 
>> Rick
> 
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[Jack Davis]

Rick, believe I prefer the original.
I'm not enthusiastic about the tree
reflection. Now that I've rethought it,
I feel eliminating much of the tree
reflection, allowing a small amount 
the tree leaves and placing the lily
pads in the primary center and allowing the far end to open up
to whatever is complimentary
to the scene.
Feel I'm aimlessly rambling and 
am leaving it in your capable hands.
If you do make more efforts, I'll
doubtless see them on the list.
Best!

J




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> On Sep 17, 2017, at 6:17 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
> After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my 
> eyeballs zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.
> 
> Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and 
> shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:
> 
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A
> 
> 
> The original:
> 
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
> 
> 
> Comments appreciated!
> 
> Rick
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[ann sanfedele]

Well for my eye you chopped off too much at the top... The most I would 
have taken off is the very top of the light bullrushes .. I think the 
pads in the water at the top frame the rest nicely..


ann

On 9/17/2017 9:17 PM, Rick Womer wrote:

After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my eyeballs 
zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.

Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and 
shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A


The original:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A


Comments appreciated!

Rick



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PESO - Evening Abstract #2 (revised)

[Rick Womer]

After reading Jack’s comments a few days ago, it did seem as though my eyeballs 
zoomed up through the photo and ran aground on the shore.

Since it’s not practical to travel back there, excavate the shoreline, and 
shoot again, I tried a few crops. I like this one the best:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-dFScLJ6/A


The original:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A


Comments appreciated!

Rick
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract

[Jack Davis]

Good luck with it Rick. It's certainly
worth the effort!

J

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> On Sep 14, 2017, at 7:52 AM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
> Thanks, Jack. You've given me a couple of ideas that I'll try this weekend.
> 
> Rick
> 
>> On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 22:03 Jack Davis  wrote:
>> 
>> It feels somewhat crowded without
>> some surrounding space.
>> Allowing an outlet at the far end
>> would be pleasing and more
>> comfortable for me.
>> 
>> J
>> Sent from my iPhone
>> 
>>> On Sep 13, 2017, at 5:37 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
>>> 
>>> On the pond in New Hampshire:
>>> 
>>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
>>> 
>>> (K-5, DA 50-200)
>>> 
>>> Comments appreciated!
>>> 
>>> Rick
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract

[Rick Womer]

Thanks, Jack. You've given me a couple of ideas that I'll try this weekend.

Rick

On Wed, Sep 13, 2017 at 22:03 Jack Davis  wrote:

> It feels somewhat crowded without
> some surrounding space.
> Allowing an outlet at the far end
> would be pleasing and more
> comfortable for me.
>
> J
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> > On Sep 13, 2017, at 5:37 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> >
> > On the pond in New Hampshire:
> >
> > https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
> >
> > (K-5, DA 50-200)
> >
> > Comments appreciated!
> >
> > Rick
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Re: PESO - Evening Abstract

[Jack Davis]

It feels somewhat crowded without
some surrounding space.
Allowing an outlet at the far end
would be pleasing and more 
comfortable for me.

J
Sent from my iPhone

> On Sep 13, 2017, at 5:37 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
> On the pond in New Hampshire:
> 
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A
> 
> (K-5, DA 50-200)
> 
> Comments appreciated!
> 
> Rick
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PESO - Evening Abstract

[Rick Womer]

On the pond in New Hampshire:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/New-Hampshire-2017/i-3jZJmqD/A

(K-5, DA 50-200)

Comments appreciated!

Rick

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