It's a poem, in need of editing. Where are the
silences? Why are there redundencies? Nice start.
AJ
--- Thomas savage [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Poem or Song?
Ain't she sweet?
It ain't necessarily so.
Tell it to me confidentially
So I may spread it abroad.
Your ending surprised me
In that all of us went on.
Open-ended and closed simultaneously.
The boat dances
To the waves' strut.
As the tempo picks up
We slow down to it
Long enough to allow
Some great silences between us.
Two sister churches wiggle in the distance.
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