Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins
Review result: Ready with Issues
I'm sorry for running late on this review, and please don't be concerned about
the length - it includes a lot of draft text as part of the comments.
Do The Right Thing, of course.
In this text,
At first, a map of endpoint properties
Hi Jensen,
Thanks very much for addressing my review. Your proposed changes
generally look very good to me.
Some more (very minor) comments in-lined below.
cheers!
On 07/09/2021, 12:04, "Jensen Zhang" wrote:
> > On Sat, Aug 28, 2021 at 8:28 AM Thomas Fossati via Datatracker
> > wrote:
> >
Hi. The vast bulk of the changes resolve my comments. I'm dropping the
resolved comments from my reply.
>
> Section 5.6, 3rd paragraph after bullets: I do not understand the
> second MUST statement in this paragraph. The sentence seems to contain
> a mix of defining the superset and a MUST
Hi Scott,
Thanks for your review. About your questions, please see my answers inline.
Best regards,
Jensen
On Wed, Aug 25, 2021 at 10:08 PM Scott Bradner via Datatracker <
nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
> Reviewer: Scott Bradner
> Review result: Ready
>
> This is an OPD-DIR review of ALTO
Hi Thomas,
Thanks for the very nice review! Please see our responses inline.
Thanks,
Jensen
On Sat, Aug 28, 2021 at 8:28 AM Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <
nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> # Abstract
>
> I suggest to slightly increase
