Re: [Anima] Review of ANIMA BRSKI-AE draft

2022-09-19 Thread Michael Richardson
Hi, I've finished reading BRSKI-AE. I made a pull request https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-ae/pull/25 with six small suggested wording changes, two of which are aasvg hacks. I wanted Alternative Environment (and Asynchronous Enrollment) to bold or underline the A and E in the HTML/PDF,

[Anima] comments on anima-brski-prm

2022-09-19 Thread Michael Richardson
Hi, I've done a top-to-bottom review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm. While I'm an author on the document, I haven't kept up on every change as Steffen and Thomas have taken lead. I should remind people that git hates trailing whitespace, and please configure your editors to remove. I use emacs,