Re: [Anima] comments on anima-brski-prm

2022-09-20 Thread Fries, Steffen
Hi Michael, I put my comments inline. Best regards Steffen > -Original Message- > From: Anima On Behalf Of Michael Richardson > Sent: Montag, 19. September 2022 17:50 > Subject: [Anima] comments on anima-brski-prm > > I should remind people that git hates trailing whitespace, and

Re: [Anima] Review of ANIMA BRSKI-AE draft

2022-09-20 Thread von Oheimb, David
Hi Michael, thanks a lot for your review, including two issues and the pull request! On Mon, 2022-09-19 at 17:56 +0200, Michael Richardson wrote: Hi, I've finished reading BRSKI-AE. I made a pull request https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-ae/pull/25 with six small suggested wording

Re: [Anima] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-12, ends September 20th 2022

2022-09-20 Thread Esko Dijk
Hello all, I read the document again and have provided my comments below. This version does not yet look ready to leave our WG, however. As an example, we have a CDDL field name mismatch and Appendix A that doesn't conform to the CDDL. And a reference that needs to become normative. Still the