RFC-editor, the diffs against XML (v3) for this document can be found at:
https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/commit/3b70d50bab007f90fed971fdcc48ca96482a8d46#diff-f0a44b214cc91a0645f06f65da3e26b6
WG: I have posted these changes to the github, and I could post the XML as
-42 if told to, but I don't want to confuse anyone.
There are a four missing trailing periods fixed, btw.
There is some change in the reference file for ietf-netconf-keystore, which I
think
is the result of a bug in the reference.foobar files (out of my
control). See the line 5736 diff.
I don't think the reference file should have that , but I think the
XML->TXT throws that out, but the XML is authoritative now...
Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> Again thanks to Michael Richardson, here are some important nits in the
> GRASP examples in the BRSKI draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the
> examples need to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting
> levels within the flood message, just two pairs of missing [].
I have updated the github and the generated XML (these examples were split
off into mostly easily maintained files).
tom petch wrote:
> I note that part of the formal specification is in CDDL and while other
> DDL - ASN.1, SMI, YANG - are bracketed with CODE BEGINS CODE ENDS - the
> CDDL is not. I suspect that it should be - perhaps a note to the RFC
> Editor is called for.
This mechanism is a homebrew insert-figures routine, and it didn't consider
CDDL. I have renamed the files to .cddl, and adjusted the insert-figures.
> In the Security Considerations I encounter MTIM which I suspect should
> be MITM (and which needs expanding on first use in s.5).
> In the YANG module, I see two references in square brackets which
> suggests that they are in XML/HTML and not plain text whereas there is
> a requirement for YANG modules to be in plain text so that they can be
> extracted from the RFC.
If you are looking at the HTML-ized tools-version of the document, then it
expands all sorts of things. All of the YANG is text as far as I can see.
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Michael Richardson , Sandelman Software Works
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