[bess] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17

2023-10-16 Thread Stephane Litkowski via Datatracker
Stephane Litkowski has requested publication of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17 as Proposed Standard on behalf of the BESS working group. Please verify the document's state at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility/ __

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-15

2023-10-16 Thread Stephane Litkowski (slitkows)
HI Neeraj, Many thanks for the updates, the text is more clear now. I’ll do the write up and proceed. Stephane From: Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr) Sent: Monday, October 16, 2023 11:31 PM To: slitkows.i...@gmail.com; Stephane Litkowski (slitkows) ; draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobil...@ietf.

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-15

2023-10-16 Thread Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)
Hi Stephane, Thanks for catching all of these – have addressed them in rev17. Regarding, Section 5.1: [SLI] I have a philosophical issue with the parent/child relationship you describe. If MAC is parent of MAC-IP, how could MAC be truly optional as a child cannot exist without its parent. [N

[bess] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17.txt

2023-10-16 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17.txt is now available. It is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS (BESS) WG of the IETF. Title: Extended Mobility Procedures for EVPN-IRB Authors: Neeraj Malhotra Ali Sajassi Aparna Pattekar

Re: [bess] Chair review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-15

2023-10-16 Thread slitkows.ietf
Hi Neeraj, Thanks for the updates. Couple new « mistakes »: * Abstract should not use xtarget references, you could use “RFC7432” as plain text but not using the reference tag. You should also not use normative language “IS REQUIRED” in the abstract. * Introduction: s/envoron