Stephane Litkowski has requested publication of
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17 as Proposed Standard on behalf of
the BESS working group.
Please verify the document's state at
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HI Neeraj,
Many thanks for the updates, the text is more clear now.
I’ll do the write up and proceed.
Stephane
From: Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)
Sent: Monday, October 16, 2023 11:31 PM
To: slitkows.i...@gmail.com; Stephane Litkowski (slitkows)
; draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobil...@ietf.
Hi Stephane,
Thanks for catching all of these – have addressed them in rev17.
Regarding,
Section 5.1:
[SLI] I have a philosophical issue with the parent/child relationship you
describe. If MAC is parent of MAC-IP, how could MAC be truly optional as a
child cannot exist without its parent.
[N
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-17.txt is now
available. It is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS (BESS) WG of the
IETF.
Title: Extended Mobility Procedures for EVPN-IRB
Authors: Neeraj Malhotra
Ali Sajassi
Aparna Pattekar
Hi Neeraj,
Thanks for the updates.
Couple new « mistakes »:
* Abstract should not use xtarget references, you could use “RFC7432” as
plain text but not using the reference tag. You should also not use normative
language “IS REQUIRED” in the abstract.
* Introduction: s/envoron