Hi Donald,
Great, many thanks.
Neeraj
From: Donald Eastlake
Date: Monday, August 21, 2023 at 6:39 PM
To: Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)
Cc: bess-cha...@ietf.org ,
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility@ietf.org
, rtg-...@ietf.org
, BESS
Subject: Re: RtgDir Early review:
Hi Neeraj,
Yes, version -13 looks good.
Thanks,
Donald
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On Mon, Aug 21, 2023 at 1:21 PM Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)
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Hi Donald,
Thanks again for the additional points. I have addressed all of the additional
comments below in the latest rev13. Please do let me know if there is any
additional input before we can move further.
Thanks,
Neeraj
From: Donald Eastlake
Date: Wednesday, August 16, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Hi Neeraj,
Sorry for the delay in responding.
Generally my comments have been incorporated and, I think, all my issues
addressed. However, some problems were introduced by the changes and there
are some nits:
- The RFC 2119 & 8174 boilerplate language should presumably be in Section
2 but has
Hi Donald,
Rev12 of the draft also takes care of the missing note with respect to six
authors on the draft. Please do let me know if there is anything else beyond
the earlier review comments that needs to be addressed.
If not, would like to request on behalf of all authors to move this
Hi Donald,
Many thanks for the details review and comments. I have published version 11 of
the document that incorporates all of your comments. Please also see inline
below for some additional clarifications.
This document repeatedly says that it may be considered a clarification of RFC
Hi Donald,
Many thanks for a detailed review and input. Much appreciated.
Will get back with document updates and clarifications within a week.
Thanks,
Neeraj
From: Donald Eastlake
Date: Monday, July 17, 2023 at 7:18 PM
To: bess-cha...@ietf.org ,
