[Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread OC Houston
We provide a workspace for entrepreneurs and business owners conducive to creating meaningful collaborative Connexions (aka connections). When they say really, how? Explain it in it the simplest way possible...over coffee. {2 cents} On Mar 28, 3:53 pm, hssmedia ty...@hssmedia.com wrote: Hello,

[Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread hssmedia
Alex - Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it. I like the idea of changing it to be more collaborative and community based. Maybe I should have two versions as this one is to target investments and money and you know how those traditional bankers understand new ideas :) Thanks again, Tyler

[Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread hssmedia
Hello, That is a great line. Do you mind if I use it? We provide a workspace for entrepreneurs and business owners conductive to creating meaningful collaborative experiences maybe? Thanks, Tyler On Mar 28, 3:06 pm, OC Houston t...@theofficeconnexion.com wrote: We provide a workspace for

[Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread OC Houston
yep, have at it! as far as targeting investors, I wouldn't stray too far away from the community aspect. that's your value proposition. it's what sets you apart from executive suites and the like. investors want to know why YOUR idea is different and likely to be more successful than the next.

Re: [Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread Alex Hillman
Toni nailed it. If you're targeting investors with one pitch and then planning on building something else, you're going to create a LOT more problems for yourself down the road. Be honest and authentic. The right investors will want that pitch. Also, don't forget that your prospective members

Re: [Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition

2012-03-28 Thread Tom Shimada
Regards, Tom Sent from my Droid Charge on Verizon 4GLTE --Original Message-- From: hssmedia ty...@hssmedia.com To: Coworking coworking@googlegroups.com Date: Wednesday, March 28, 2012 2:16:29 PM GMT-0700 Subject: [Coworking] Re: Advice on a Elevator Speech and Value Proposition Hello