Bug#782836: Debian Edu Jessie Beta 1 should be mentioned

[Paul Gevers]

Hi Holger,

On Sat, 18 Apr 2015 16:35:26 +0200 Holger Levsen 
wrote:
> package: release-notes
> tags: + patch
> x-debbugs-cc: debian-...@lists.debian.org, debian-public...@lists.debian.org
> 
> Hi,
> 
> please include the following patch to the release-notes. I also assume this 
> is 
> a nice information for the planned live-denting...
> 
> 
> News from Debian Edu Blend
> 
> The Debian Edu / Skolelinux project is proud to announce the first Beta 
> release of Debian Edu based on Debian Jessie. For the first time Debian Edu 
> is 
^^

I am pretty sure we can just close this bug, no? Or do you want to add
something like this for the buster release?

Paul



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Bug#782836: Debian Edu Jessie Beta 1 should be mentioned

[Holger Levsen]

package: release-notes
tags: + patch
x-debbugs-cc: debian-...@lists.debian.org, debian-public...@lists.debian.org

Hi,

please include the following patch to the release-notes. I also assume this is 
a nice information for the planned live-denting...

section id=debian-edu
titleNews from Debian Edu Blend/title
para
The Debian Edu / Skolelinux project is proud to announce the first Beta 
release of Debian Edu based on Debian Jessie. For the first time Debian Edu is 
only made up out of packages from the main Debian archive, thus the Debian Edu 
team was able to drop their own package repository.

Debian Edu provides an out-of-the box environment for a completely configured 
school network. To ease installation and maintainance the comprehensive
ulink url=https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Jessie; Debian 
Edu Jessie manual/ulink has been translated into in seven languages.

An overview of educational software packages included in Debian Edu is 
provided by the ulink url=http://blends.debian.org/edu/tasks;Debian Edu 
task pages/ulink - though any Debian package is just an apt-get install 
away!

Our current plan is to release Debian Edu Jessie with the first Debian Jessie 
pointrelease. Please consider reporting feedback to make this happen!
 /para
 /section


Thanks for maintaining the release-notes!

cheers,
Holger


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Bug#782836: Debian Edu Jessie Beta 1 should be mentioned

[Justin B Rye]

Package: release-notes
Followup-For: Bug #782836

Here's a version with a couple of changes:

Index: en/whats-new.dbk
===
--- en/whats-new.dbk(revision 10776)
+++ en/whats-new.dbk(working copy)
@@ -513,6 +513,23 @@
   the systemitem role=packagephp-horde/systemitem package.
   /para
 /section
+section id=debian-edu

(I'm arranging the blends alphabetically!)

+titleNews from Debian Edu Blend/title
+paraThe Debian Edu / Skolelinux project is proud to announce the first 
Beta
+release of Debian Edu based on Debian Jessie. For the first time, Debian 
Edu is

Extra comma.

+only made up out of packages from the main Debian archive; thus the Debian 
Edu

Comma promoted to semicolon.

+team was able to drop their own package repository./para

Extra paras.

+paraDebian Edu provides an out-of-the box environment for a completely 
configured
+school network. To ease installation and maintenance the comprehensive

Spelling (maintAIning but maintEnance).

+ulink url=https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Jessie;
+Debian Edu Jessie manual/ulink has been translated into seven 
languages./para
+paraAn overview of educational software packages included in Debian Edu 
is
+provided by the ulink url=http://blends.debian.org/edu/tasks;Debian Edu
+task pages/ulink - though any Debian package is just an apt-get
+install away!/para
+paraThe current plan is to release Debian Edu Jessie with the first 
Debian Jessie

s/Our/The/ - since we here isn't all the authors of these release
notes.

+point release. Please consider reporting feedback to make this 
happen!/para

Point release, two words (though my dictionary thinks it's a kind of
avalanche.)

+/section

-- 
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Index: en/whats-new.dbk
===
--- en/whats-new.dbk	(revision 10776)
+++ en/whats-new.dbk	(working copy)
@@ -513,6 +513,23 @@
   the systemitem role=packagephp-horde/systemitem package.
   /para
 /section
+section id=debian-edu
+titleNews from Debian Edu Blend/title
+paraThe Debian Edu / Skolelinux project is proud to announce the first Beta
+release of Debian Edu based on Debian Jessie. For the first time, Debian Edu is
+only made up out of packages from the main Debian archive; thus the Debian Edu
+team was able to drop their own package repository./para
+paraDebian Edu provides an out-of-the box environment for a completely configured
+school network. To ease installation and maintenance the comprehensive
+ulink url=https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Jessie;
+Debian Edu Jessie manual/ulink has been translated into seven languages./para
+paraAn overview of educational software packages included in Debian Edu is
+provided by the ulink url=http://blends.debian.org/edu/tasks;Debian Edu
+task pages/ulink - though any Debian package is just an apt-get
+install away!/para
+paraThe current plan is to release Debian Edu Jessie with the first Debian Jessie
+point release. Please consider reporting feedback to make this happen!/para
+/section
 section id=debian-games
 titleDebian Games Blend/title
 paraThe Debian Games Team proudly presents the Debian Games ulink