Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt

[Bob Harold]

On Mon, May 4, 2020 at 10:11 AM  wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
>
> Title   : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators
> Authors : Sara Dickinson
>   Benno J. Overeinder
>   Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij
>   Allison Mankin
> Filename: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt
> Pages   : 43
> Date: 2020-05-04
>
> Abstract:
>This document presents operational, policy, and security
>considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to
>offer DNS Privacy services.  With these recommendations, the operator
>can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide,
>and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users.
>
>This document also presents a framework to assist writers of a DNS
>Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to DNS Security
>Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice Statements described
>in RFC6841).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
>
>
Thanks for the update.  Some comments.

7.1.1.  Definition of the Trust model

"overtime" > "over time"

7.1.2.  Trust Model Bootstrapping

The whole first paragraph is difficult to parse - it does not seem like
complete sentences.

7.2.2.  Automated Trust Anchor Check

"to to" > "to"
But the sentence does not seem complete.

-- 
Bob Harold
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[dns-privacy] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt

[Sara Dickinson]

Hi All, 

This update just fixes the section references so they match the latest version 
of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt for consistency (as it was raised in 
the IESG review).

Sara. 


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> Date: Mon, 04 May 2020 07:10:47 -0700
> From: internet-dra...@ietf.org 
> Reply-To: dns-privacy@ietf.org 
> To:   i-d-annou...@ietf.org 
> CC:   dns-privacy@ietf.org 
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
> 
> Title : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators
> Authors : Sara Dickinson
> Benno J. Overeinder
> Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij
> Allison Mankin
> Filename : draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt
> Pages : 43
> Date : 2020-05-04
> 
> Abstract:
> This document presents operational, policy, and security
> considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to
> offer DNS Privacy services. With these recommendations, the operator
> can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide,
> and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users.
> 
> This document also presents a framework to assist writers of a DNS
> Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to DNS Security
> Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice Statements described
> in RFC6841).
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/ 
> 
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 
> 
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09 
> 
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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Re: [dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt

[Sara Dickinson]

Hi All, 

To move this draft forward, this update addresses comments made during the IETF 
LC including:

* All general comments
* Section re-numbering as suggested by Vittorio Bertola
* The most recently suggested text for Section 6.1.1.2 - Ekr could you please 
confirm if you are now happy with this text?

Please review to make sure everything is captured correctly. (Note that I 
haven’t addresses the Intdir review in this version - I’ll do that in the next 
one).

Best regards

Sara. 

> On 4 May 2020, at 15:09, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A new version (-05) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt
> 
> Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/
> 
> Diff from previous version:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the diff is available at tools.ietf.org.
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> IETF Secretariat.
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[dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt

[internet-drafts]

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.

Title   : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators
Authors : Sara Dickinson
  Benno J. Overeinder
  Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij
  Allison Mankin
Filename: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09.txt
Pages   : 43
Date: 2020-05-04

Abstract:
   This document presents operational, policy, and security
   considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to
   offer DNS Privacy services.  With these recommendations, the operator
   can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide,
   and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users.

   This document also presents a framework to assist writers of a DNS
   Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to DNS Security
   Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice Statements described
   in RFC6841).


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-09


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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[dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt

[internet-drafts]

A new version (-05) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt

Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed


The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/

Diff from previous version:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05

Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the diff is available at tools.ietf.org.

IETF Secretariat.


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[dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt

[internet-drafts]

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.

Title   : DNS Privacy Considerations
Authors : Stephane Bortzmeyer
  Sara Dickinson
Filename: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05.txt
Pages   : 29
Date: 2020-05-04

Abstract:
   This document describes the privacy issues associated with the use of
   the DNS by Internet users.  It is intended to be an analysis of the
   present situation and does not prescribe solutions.  This document
   obsoletes RFC 7626.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-05


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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