Thanks for the review, Bob.
On 4/28/2022 6:02 AM, Bob Harold wrote:
On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 4:57 AM wrote:
A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/
Diff from previous version:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12
IETF Secretariat.
Minor nits:
In 5.1.1. Draft Version Identification
In the example "doq-i00"
Where does the "i" come from? I was expecting "doq-00".
That was introduced a long time ago, to differentiate between this draft
and the incompatible encodings used in the individual draft
draft-huitema-dprive-dnsoquic. The whole section 5.1.1 where this is
defined is provisional, and will be removed before RFC publication.
5.5. Session Resumption and 0-RTT
Next to last paragraph, "errros" -> "errors"
6.3. Address Validation
The end of the first paragraph "to a factor 3." -> "to a factor of 3."
The draft is now in the hands of the RFC editors. I trust them, but I
will verify that these issues are fixed.
-- Christian Huitema
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