Re: [dwm] GSoC 2009 mentors please shout
Thank you for the instructions Matthias. I pushed the changes I suggested earlier (the obvious stuff) along with some other corrections. I suggest others proof-read this document as well, as I still believe there are awkward and unclear sentences lurking in there. On Sat, Mar 7, 2009 at 11:06 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott wrote: > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 06:21:41PM -0500, voltaic wrote: >> Hey Matthias, > > Hi, > >> That URL you mentioned has some simple typos in it. The page is not >> publicly editable, so I thought I'd let you know. The things that >> stick out at me right away are: > > Well, you can edit it. See http://www.suckless.org/wiki/ for further > details. > >> "proof" should be "prove" >> "Our project scopes focus on advanced" should be "...focuses on advanced" >> "projects who focus" should be "projects that focus" >> Need a comma after "average and normal end users" > > Thanks, very obvious. The comma seems reasonable. > >> I could go on, but editing that page over email is not the most >> efficient way of doing things. > > Just send me the diff or push it yourself. However, I'll take out my > grammar book and look for mistakes in the GSoC page. > > Could another native speaker (preferably British) look for mistakes > as well? > > Regards, > Matthias-Christian > >> On Fri, Mar 6, 2009 at 10:13 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott >> wrote: >> > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 03:02:17PM +, Anselm R Garbe wrote: >> >> Hi there, >> >> >> >> please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC >> >> project this year for suckless.org. >> >> We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. >> > >> > I also created a list of mentors: >> > >> > http://www.suckless.org:8000/gsoc.html >> > >> > You may add yourself to the list if Anselm agreed. >> > >> >> Kind regards, >> >> --Anselm >> > >> > Regards, >> > Matthias-Christian Ott >> > >> > >> > >
Re: [dwm] GSoC 2009 mentors please shout
On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 06:21:41PM -0500, voltaic wrote: > Hey Matthias, Hi, > That URL you mentioned has some simple typos in it. The page is not > publicly editable, so I thought I'd let you know. The things that > stick out at me right away are: Well, you can edit it. See http://www.suckless.org/wiki/ for further details. > "proof" should be "prove" > "Our project scopes focus on advanced" should be "...focuses on advanced" > "projects who focus" should be "projects that focus" > Need a comma after "average and normal end users" Thanks, very obvious. The comma seems reasonable. > I could go on, but editing that page over email is not the most > efficient way of doing things. Just send me the diff or push it yourself. However, I'll take out my grammar book and look for mistakes in the GSoC page. Could another native speaker (preferably British) look for mistakes as well? Regards, Matthias-Christian > On Fri, Mar 6, 2009 at 10:13 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott > wrote: > > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 03:02:17PM +, Anselm R Garbe wrote: > >> Hi there, > >> > >> please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC > >> project this year for suckless.org. > >> We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. > > > > I also created a list of mentors: > > > > http://www.suckless.org:8000/gsoc.html > > > > You may add yourself to the list if Anselm agreed. > > > >> Kind regards, > >> --Anselm > > > > Regards, > > Matthias-Christian Ott > > > > >
Re: [dwm] GSoC 2009 mentors please shout
Hey Matthias, That URL you mentioned has some simple typos in it. The page is not publicly editable, so I thought I'd let you know. The things that stick out at me right away are: "proof" should be "prove" "Our project scopes focus on advanced" should be "...focuses on advanced" "projects who focus" should be "projects that focus" Need a comma after "average and normal end users" I could go on, but editing that page over email is not the most efficient way of doing things. On Fri, Mar 6, 2009 at 10:13 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott wrote: > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 03:02:17PM +, Anselm R Garbe wrote: >> Hi there, >> >> please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC >> project this year for suckless.org. >> We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. > > I also created a list of mentors: > > http://www.suckless.org:8000/gsoc.html > > You may add yourself to the list if Anselm agreed. > >> Kind regards, >> --Anselm > > Regards, > Matthias-Christian Ott > >
Re: [dwm] GSoC 2009 mentors please shout
On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 03:02:17PM +, Anselm R Garbe wrote: > Hi there, > > please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC > project this year for suckless.org. > We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. I also created a list of mentors: http://www.suckless.org:8000/gsoc.html You may add yourself to the list if Anselm agreed. > Kind regards, > --Anselm Regards, Matthias-Christian Ott
[dwm] GSoC 2009 mentors please shout
Hi there, please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC project this year for suckless.org. We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. Kind regards, --Anselm
