Re: [elm-discuss] Help for article review for SPA applications in Elm 0.18

2016-11-16 Thread Adrián Ribao
Hi, thanks! and than you for your suggestions!

I think that explaining in the beginning what you can learn from the post 
is a very good idea.

Thanks for your feedback because it was really helpful.

Adrián

El martes, 15 de noviembre de 2016, 23:14:47 (UTC+1), Wouter In t Velt 
escribió:
>
> Great article!
> I really like the way that you take the reader step by step through 
> building a basic SPA, which even includes navigation and url parsing.
>
> Personally, I think it is fine to let the reader "play along" by making a 
> local copy and work on that. It would be useful if you point out that the 
> "localhost" links only work if reader already has elm-reactor running. But 
> I guess the point you are trying to make is that your app allows user to 
> type these urls in the browser.
> Maybe keep the urls, but remove the links?
> In general, it would be nice to have links to a working example, possibly 
> on gh-pages.
>
> As general feedback: Because it is quite a long read,  adding an explicit 
> comment in the beginning of what you hope the reader will learn from your 
> post would be useful. E.g. "demonstrate that it is easy and fun to scale 
> Elm, that your code remains readable", or "if you are learning Elm, or want 
> to build a SPA for yourself, here is an example to get you started".
>
> I've added some minor comments on typo's and readibility in the article 
> too.
> Suggest that you make function calls to imported functions explicit, e.g. 
> Navigation.newUrl instead of newUrl.
> Make it clear to readers whether a function is defined by you or imported 
> (and from where).
>
> Thanks for sharing this! 
> Really useful, I have just begun to refactor a SPA to 0.18, and your 
> explanation of the new navigation module was really helpful.
>

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Re: [elm-discuss] Help for article review for SPA applications in Elm 0.18

2016-11-15 Thread Wouter In t Velt
Great article!
I really like the way that you take the reader step by step through 
building a basic SPA, which even includes navigation and url parsing.

Personally, I think it is fine to let the reader "play along" by making a 
local copy and work on that. It would be useful if you point out that the 
"localhost" links only work if reader already has elm-reactor running. But 
I guess the point you are trying to make is that your app allows user to 
type these urls in the browser.
Maybe keep the urls, but remove the links?
In general, it would be nice to have links to a working example, possibly 
on gh-pages.

As general feedback: Because it is quite a long read,  adding an explicit 
comment in the beginning of what you hope the reader will learn from your 
post would be useful. E.g. "demonstrate that it is easy and fun to scale 
Elm, that your code remains readable", or "if you are learning Elm, or want 
to build a SPA for yourself, here is an example to get you started".

I've added some minor comments on typo's and readibility in the article too.
Suggest that you make function calls to imported functions explicit, e.g. 
Navigation.newUrl instead of newUrl.
Make it clear to readers whether a function is defined by you or imported 
(and from where).

Thanks for sharing this! 
Really useful, I have just begun to refactor a SPA to 0.18, and your 
explanation of the new navigation module was really helpful.

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Re: [elm-discuss] Help for article review for SPA applications in Elm 0.18

2016-11-15 Thread Adrián Ribao
Not sure about gh-pages, but I think is better to download the repo and 
checkout the tags running elm-reactor. It's quite easy to setup.

This way you can easily play with the code and make changes.

I will investigate about gh-pages though.

Thanks!

El martes, 15 de noviembre de 2016, 18:13:51 (UTC+1), Nick H escribió:
>
> I wonder if you could run the example on gh-pages? That way the links will 
> work (instead of linking to localhost).
>
> I've not ever used the navigation & url-parser packages, so some of this 
> was new to me. I like the way the program develops incrementally. Thanks 
> for sharing!
>
> On Tue, Nov 15, 2016 at 7:21 AM, Adrián Ribao  > wrote:
>
>> Hi!
>>
>> I've written a post related how to do SPAs using elm 0.18. It starts from 
>> scratch, following the process I took while I was creating mine.
>>
>> I'm new in Elm and functional languages so I'd love to get your feedback. 
>> Also, I'm not a native English speaker so the text could have typos or 
>> incorrect grammar. Any help is welcome.
>>
>> This is the post: 
>> https://medium.com/@adrian_ribao/how-to-create-a-spa-application-in-elm-0-18-from-scratch-68d25e0631f6
>>
>> It's also my first post on medium, I think you can make annotations even 
>> though it's in a draft state.
>>
>> Thank you!
>>
>> Adrián
>>
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Re: [elm-discuss] Help for article review for SPA applications in Elm 0.18

2016-11-15 Thread Nick H
I wonder if you could run the example on gh-pages? That way the links will
work (instead of linking to localhost).

I've not ever used the navigation & url-parser packages, so some of this
was new to me. I like the way the program develops incrementally. Thanks
for sharing!

On Tue, Nov 15, 2016 at 7:21 AM, Adrián Ribao  wrote:

> Hi!
>
> I've written a post related how to do SPAs using elm 0.18. It starts from
> scratch, following the process I took while I was creating mine.
>
> I'm new in Elm and functional languages so I'd love to get your feedback.
> Also, I'm not a native English speaker so the text could have typos or
> incorrect grammar. Any help is welcome.
>
> This is the post: https://medium.com/@adrian_ribao/how-to-create-a-spa-
> application-in-elm-0-18-from-scratch-68d25e0631f6
>
> It's also my first post on medium, I think you can make annotations even
> though it's in a draft state.
>
> Thank you!
>
> Adrián
>
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