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From: Framers on
behalf of Cheryl Magadieu
Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2020 1:13 PM
To: An email list for people using Adobe FrameMaker software.
Subject: Re: [Framers] [EXTERNAL] Grammar question
"All" is superfluous; I would remove it.
I would also remove "before proceedin
s from all units, including the supervisor
and each node.
-FR
From: Framers on
behalf of Cheryl Magadieu
Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2020 1:13 PM
To: An email list for people using Adobe FrameMaker software.
Subject: Re: [Framers] [EXTERNAL] Grammar ques
"All" is superfluous; I would remove it.
I would also remove "before proceeding further"; it is assumed that the
user will perform this step before proceeding to the next one.
Revised sentence: Remove the covers from the supervisor and nodes.
As to whether the revision is "better," minimalists
I prefer "A". "Further," though, is redundant. If you are proceeding, it can be
presumed that you are going further.
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From: Framers
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Of Doug
Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2020 12:52 PM
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