[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-admitted-realtime-dscp-05.txt

2008-11-19 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-pnfs-block-09

2008-11-19 Thread Black_David
I think I want to rev the draft as Ben's first issue regarding a SHOULD may require some careful wordsmithing - it's not immediately clear to me that just substituting a MUST for the SHOULD will suffice. Thanks, --David > -Original Message- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTE

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-pnfs-block-09

2008-11-19 Thread lars.eggert
Hi, do you want me to stick this change into the tracker as an RFC Editor Note, or do you prefer to rev the draft? Lars On 08-11-18 22:19, "ext Jason Glasgow" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > David, > > Thank you to Ben for the review. His comment on "GETDEVICEINFO" points out a > problem in the