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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-14.txt
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-06-09
IETF LC End Date: 2009
On Jun 8, 2009, at 4:21 PM, Mary Barnes wrote:
I guess I'm still missing your original concern. But, one problem with
that sentence is that it's really out of context and would make more
sense if it were the first sentence in the last paragraph in section
8,
as that then leads to the text on
Hi Mary,
Responses inline. I've edited out sections that I think we have
closure on.
On Jun 8, 2009, at 1:55 PM, Mary Barnes wrote:
[...]
-- Section 6.2, value list:
-- In my previous review, I was confused as to the relationship
between
the geodetic/civic and LoBV/LoBR choices. I thi
Francis Dupont wrote:
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Joel,
Thanks for the review. At this point, I will not have time to
look at these comments until later this week or possibly early next
week. When I do, I will provide responses to your comments.
Thanks,
Brian
Joel M. Halpern wrote:
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