[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02

2009-06-09 Thread McCann Peter-A001034
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-geop

[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-hollenbeck-rfc4931bis-01

2009-06-09 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipping-cc-framework-11.txt

2009-06-09 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-s

[Gen-art] Gen Art review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-14.txt

2009-06-09 Thread Avshalom Houri
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-mib-14.txt Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-06-09 IETF LC End Date: 2009

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-09 Thread Ben Campbell
On Jun 8, 2009, at 4:21 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: I guess I'm still missing your original concern. But, one problem with that sentence is that it's really out of context and would make more sense if it were the first sentence in the last paragraph in section 8, as that then leads to the text on

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-geopriv-http-location-delivery-14

2009-06-09 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi Mary, Responses inline. I've edited out sections that I think we have closure on. On Jun 8, 2009, at 1:55 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: [...] -- Section 6.2, value list: -- In my previous review, I was confused as to the relationship between the geodetic/civic and LoBV/LoBR choices. I thi

Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-sip-eku-05.txt

2009-06-09 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
Francis Dupont wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-ntp-autokey-05.txt

2009-06-09 Thread Brian Haberman
Joel, Thanks for the review. At this point, I will not have time to look at these comments until later this week or possibly early next week. When I do, I will provide responses to your comments. Thanks, Brian Joel M. Halpern wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-enum-iax-05.txt

2009-06-09 Thread Miguel A. Garcia
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-enum-