[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-speermint-requirements-07.txt

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-speermint-requirements-07.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft i

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-iana-rfc3330bis-07.txt

At 08:06 AM 7/8/2009, Francis Dupont wrote: Nits/editorial comments: I have still (cf review of the 06 version) two concerns about the Abstract: - the first sentence "This document obsoletes RFC 3330." belongs to the document meta-data and should be removed before publication Many docume

[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-syslog-msg-mib-04

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-o

[Gen-art] review of draft-iana-rfc3330bis-07.txt

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-iana-r