Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-cheshire-sudn-ipv4only-dot-arpa-15

2020-02-18 Thread Erik Kline
On Tue, 18 Feb 2020 at 12:43, David Schinazi wrote: > > Hi Erik, > > Thank you for your review. Responses inline. > > Thanks, > David > > > On Mon, Feb 17, 2020 at 4:38 PM Erik Kline via Datatracker > wrote: > [snip] >> >> Are any of the recom

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-cheshire-sudn-ipv4only-dot-arpa-15

2020-02-17 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-09

2019-12-16 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21

2019-12-02 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2-tls13-02

2019-10-12 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10

2019-08-27 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-yang-23

2019-07-17 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-07

2019-05-27 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-23

2019-04-17 Thread Erik Kline via Datatracker
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08

2019-02-06 Thread Erik Kline
On Wed, 6 Feb 2019 at 06:39, Barry Leiba wrote: > > > > [3] Naive question: do we want a statement about reserving/agreeing to > > > never > > > allocate "example" in the .well-known space? > > > > Good question! I'm neutral on this; does anyone have strong feelings? > > I wouldn't say my

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-15

2018-12-13 Thread Erik Kline
On Thu, 13 Dec 2018 at 00:26, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote: > Erik - > > Thanx for the review. > Responses inline. > > > -Original Message- > > From: Erik Kline > > Sent: Wednesday, December 12, 2018 11:30 PM > > To: gen-art@ietf.org > > Cc:

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-15

2018-12-12 Thread Erik Kline
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-op3ft-leaptofrogans-uri-scheme-03

2018-11-13 Thread Erik Kline
On Tue, 13 Nov 2018 at 20:23, Dale R. Worley wrote: > > Erik Kline writes: > > Nits/editorial comments: I can't help but wonder if an example or two > > wouldn't > > round out the document. But maybe leaptofrogans: URIs/IRIs aren't amenable > > to > >

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-op3ft-leaptofrogans-uri-scheme-03

2018-11-12 Thread Erik Kline
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06

2018-06-30 Thread Erik Kline
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-replay-02

2018-04-23 Thread Erik Kline
Reviewer: Erik Kline Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more