Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-resnick-on-consensus-05

2013-10-27 Thread Pete Resnick
read it the firs time, the RFC 2026 definition of "appeal" jumped into my mind. That is not the intent here. Maybe it is just me. Please consider rewording, especially since the RFC 2026 meaning is used in Section 3. I'll see if I can drum up a better synonym. pr -- Pete Resni

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-07

2013-08-21 Thread Pete Resnick
nk it should be a separate section. Nits/editorial comments: Section 3 the end of 2^nd paragraph "mechansisms" to "mechanisms" -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478 ___

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-salgueiro-vcarddav-kind-device-06

2012-11-30 Thread Pete Resnick
"Additionally, [RFC6473] has defined a value of "application" for the KIND property to represent software applications."? I can put the two changes (this one, and the one suggest by PSA as edited by Joe) in the RFC Editor notes of the tracker for the moment. Who know, ma

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

2012-09-21 Thread Pete Resnick
On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote: -- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721 It does. Sorry. You said abstract, not intro. Got it. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)65

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

2012-09-21 Thread Pete Resnick
t worth mentioning that the LANG command really doesn't make this issue worse than it already was. Taken under advisement. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102 _

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07

2012-07-17 Thread Pete Resnick
On 7/17/12 5:14 PM, John C Klensin wrote: --On Tuesday, July 17, 2012 13:57 -0500 Pete Resnick wrote: Perhaps I'm just being contrarian today, but I *do* think this document should be BCP and not Informational. It is not a requirements document in the sense that it is layin

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-lsn-requirements-07

2012-07-17 Thread Pete Resnick
laying out requirements for future protocol documents being developed by a WG; it is a consensus document listing the requirements for the operation and administration of a type of device. If that doesn't fall within the 2nd paragraph of RFC 2026 section 5, I don't know what does.

Re: [Gen-art] [spfbis] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-spfbis-experiment-09.txt

2012-06-09 Thread Pete Resnick
ions drawn in the draft. I'm afraid you got distracted by Hector's question and didn't answer SM's. Please do. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102 ___

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-06

2011-11-22 Thread Pete Resnick
566 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com <http://bell-labs.com>,acm.org <http://acm.org>} / vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com <mailto:vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com> Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-20 Thread Pete Resnick
encoded *characters* are likely to be many more than 998 octets long. So the change is to say that the limit is in octets, not in characters. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)65

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-20 Thread Pete Resnick
. bbb^^^ I wonder if there is an error in the third line and the text should say "... limit to 998 octets" rather than "988". Otherwise, I can't explain the 988 figure. -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualc

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-06.txt

2011-07-28 Thread Pete Resnick
: 3839,4393,4337 Apple Inc. Yup. That'll do it. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)651-4478, Fax: (858)651-1102 ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@iet

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-06.txt

2011-07-28 Thread Pete Resnick
dates="1234,5678,9012"'. But like I said, if you give me the list, I can just stick that in an RFC Editor note instead of you submitting a new draft. Your call. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorporated - Direct phone: (858)65

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-06.txt

2011-07-28 Thread Pete Resnick
quot; listing in the metadata. You don't have to do another update for this; I can do this in an RFC Editor Note, but I'd like to enlist your assistance in getting the list of RFCs together. pr -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incorp

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-gellens-mime-bucket-bis-05.txt

2011-07-10 Thread Pete Resnick
ncoded with a percent symbol. That would make the text: and single quote characters have special meaning and so MUST themselves be percent encoded. ^^^ This comment also applies to the last paragraph in Section 4.2. - I don't understand why Sections 3 and

Re: [Gen-art] [EAI] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-imap-utf8-07

2009-09-03 Thread Pete Resnick
in the text I've entered an RFC Editor note that updates the document to reference this RFC. Added. ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1341 (Obsoleted by RFC 1521) According to authors this reference is intentional. It is. Thanks David (and Alexey). pr -- Pete Resnick &

Re: [Gen-art] final review of draft-resnick-2822upd-06.txt

2008-05-07 Thread Pete Resnick
arge amount of ABNF. It has had a good scouring, but additional review is always welcome. >About the X-* header fields IMHO there is nothing to change in this document. Good. I like that answer. Thanks again. pr -- Pete Resnick <http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Incor

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