Re: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-11 Thread Eggert, Lars
Hi, thanks for the review! On 2016-10-11, at 21:21, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > (1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a definition but > it has been removed.) I think this can be addressed by an RFC Editor Note. > (2) NIT: unlinked references > > I

[Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-05

2016-10-11 Thread Elwyn Davies
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04

2016-10-11 Thread Orit Levin
Thanks, Yoav! This addresses all my comments. Best, Orit. -Original Message- From: Yoav Nir [mailto:ynir.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Tuesday, October 11, 2016 12:46 PM To: Orit Levin Cc: draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves@ietf.org; General Area Review Team

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04

2016-10-11 Thread Yoav Nir
Hi, Orit. I accepted most of your suggestions with a few exceptions below: > On 28 Sep 2016, at 0:30, Orit Levin wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04

2016-10-11 Thread Yoav Nir
Thanks for that. For some reason gmail sent this to the spam folder. Yoav > On 7 Oct 2016, at 20:32, Kathleen Moriarty > wrote: > > Orit, > > Thanks for the review, making sure the editor see this. > > Kathleen > > On Tue, Sep 27, 2016 at 5:30 PM, Orit

[Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18

2016-10-11 Thread Paul Kyzivat
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-rtcp-13

2016-10-11 Thread Lorenzo Miniero
Hello Russ, sorry for this late reply... thanks for reviewing the document! As to the points you raised in your review, I've added a couple of comments inline. On Mon, 3 Oct 2016 15:26:30 -0400 Russ Housley wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC (and telechat) review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-rdap-status-mapping-01

2016-10-11 Thread Robert Sparks
Responses inline - On 10/10/16 10:28 AM, Gould, James wrote: Robert, Thank you for your review and feedback. I provide responses to your feedback below. — JG *James Gould *Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 VerisignInc.com