I have some unfilled reports in gen-art-by-reviewer.html:
- draft-ietf-isis-caps-06.txt: done after the last update
(summary: Ready with nits)
- draft-ietf-behave-multicast-03.txt: summary: Ready
- draft-ietf-rddp-rdmap-07.txt: updated after the review,
the main issue, reference to the old
Spencer,
Thanks for this thorough review, responses can be found inline.
Cheers,
/L-E
> There are several places in the draft (section 3.3 and 4.1
> are examples, but I noted others) where the "INCOMPLETE",
> "INCORRECT", "INCORRECT AND INVALIDATED", "CORRECTED",
> "FORMAL ADDITION" notation i
Miguel
Miguel Garcia wrote:
Just restricting to the point that requires further discussion:
Padma Pillay-Esnault wrote:
Miguel Garcia wrote:
- None of the figures in the draft include a caption. Captions are
nice to refer to figures (even from other drafts). I would suggest
to add capt
Miguel Garcia wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Do
Just restricting to the point that requires further discussion:
Padma Pillay-Esnault wrote:
Miguel Garcia wrote:
- None of the figures in the draft include a caption. Captions are
nice to refer to figures (even from other drafts). I would suggest to
add captions to all the figures.
Can y
