[Gen-art] (full) review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-06.txt

2007-10-12 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-behave-nat-icmp-05.txt

2007-10-12 Thread Pyda Srisuresh
Thanks, Miguel and Magnus. I will get a revised draft out with the proposed changes. Thanks. regards, suresh --- Magnus Westerlund <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Miguel Garcia skrev: > > Hi Suresh: > > > > Inline comments (only those that deserve a bit more discussion). > > > > /Miguel > > > > P

[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-crisp-iris-dchk-07.txt

2007-10-12 Thread Elwyn Davies
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-behave-nat-icmp-05.txt

2007-10-12 Thread Magnus Westerlund
Miguel Garcia skrev: > Hi Suresh: > > Inline comments (only those that deserve a bit more discussion). > > /Miguel > > Pyda Srisuresh wrote: >> Miguel, >> >> Thank you for the comments. Please see my responses inline. >> >> regards, >> suresh >> >> --- Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: >>