[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-roll-home-routing-reqs-06.txt

2008-12-22 Thread Elwyn Davies
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-softwire-hs-framework-l2tpv2-10

2008-12-22 Thread Black_David
After a lengthy private discussion with Carlos, and some serious quality time spent with RFC 2661 ;-), here's where I think the two major issues from my Gen-ART review of this draft stand: (1) AVP for softwire profile of L2TPv2. I'm no longer convinced that a new AVP is needed, but the

Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-softwire-hs-framework-l2tpv2-10

2008-12-22 Thread Mark Townsley
Carlos Pignataro wrote: WG, On 12/22/2008 7:49 PM, black_da...@emc.com said the following: After a lengthy private discussion with Carlos, and some serious quality time spent with RFC 2661 ;-), here's where I think the two major issues from my Gen-ART review of this draft stand: (1) AVP