[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5666bis-09

2017-02-06 Thread Ralph Droms
Reviewer: Ralph Droms Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] COMPLETE Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-stir-rfc4474bis-14

2017-02-06 Thread Vijay K.Gurbani
On 01/24/2017 12:59 PM, Peterson, Jon wrote: > Hey Vijay, > > Took me a bit to get back to you here, sorry. Appreciate the notes. > Here's my thoughts. Jon: No worries. I must also apologize for the delay in getting back to you. More inline (please see to end). I have re-arranged your

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-06 Thread Pete Resnick
On 6 Feb 2017, at 7:36, Daniele Ceccarelli wrote: Hi Jari, Pete, First of all thanks for the accurate review. All the nits/editorial comments are correct and will be fixed. Regarding the minor issue: 4.1.1: The figure is a bit confusing: There might not exist a "Max Slot Width at

Re: [Gen-art] [OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-11

2017-02-06 Thread Nat Sakimura
Thanks Joel, -11 only contains the fixes to the comments received by Jan. 17. I am now applying all the edits needed for the comments received after that. The next version will fix the problem you have pointed out. Best, Nat On Fri, Feb 3, 2017 at 8:03 AM Joel Halpern

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-06 Thread Daniele Ceccarelli
Hi Jari, Pete, First of all thanks for the accurate review. All the nits/editorial comments are correct and will be fixed. Regarding the minor issue: > 4.1.1: > > The figure is a bit confusing: There might not exist a "Max Slot Width at > Priority > 7" if bit 7 is clear in the Priority

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-07

2017-02-06 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Pete. Authors, any comments? Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sctp-sdp-22

2017-02-06 Thread Christer Holmberg
Hi, I¹ve created a pull request with the changes based on Brian¹s comments. https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-sctp-sdp/pull/10 Regards, Christer On 05/02/17 21:05, "Brian E Carpenter" wrote: >Hi Christer, >On 06/02/2017 03:14, Christer Holmberg wrote: >> Hi