Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-10

2018-10-04 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Hi Eric, On 2018-10-05 04:15, Eric Rosen wrote: >> Minor issues: >> - >> >> As I understand it, if a network only partially supports the new >> (LIR-pF) flag, it doesn't work properly. So we find at the end of >> section 2: >> >> ...the ingress node can conclude >> that the egress

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases-18

2018-10-04 Thread Pete Resnick
Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05

2018-10-04 Thread Elwyn Davies
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-10

2018-10-04 Thread Eric Rosen
> Minor issues: > - > > As I understand it, if a network only partially supports the new > (LIR-pF) flag, it doesn't work properly. So we find at the end of > section 2: > > ...the ingress node can conclude > that the egress node originating that Leaf A-D route does not support >

Re: [Gen-art] [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

2018-10-04 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I had thought we had discussed sufficient edits. When I looked at the diff, what I saw helped some, but still left me concerned. Yours, Joel On 10/4/18 6:06 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote: Hi, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned

Re: [Gen-art] [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

2018-10-04 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Hi, Joel Halpern wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >