[Gen-art] Review Assignments

[Jean Mahoney via Datatracker]

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2019-10-03

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Francesca PalombiniTelechat  2019-08-28 
draft-ietf-pce-lsp-control-request-09 *

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Tim Evens  Last Call 2019-10-03 draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2019-10-04 
draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-security-12
Joel Halpern   Last Call 2019-10-07 draft-ietf-ipsecme-implicit-iv-07
Christer Holmberg  Last Call 2019-10-09 
draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-07
Russ Housley   Last Call 2019-10-10 draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-02

Early review requests:

Reviewer   DueDraft
Robert Sparks  2019-10-31 draft-ietf-rift-rift-08

* Other revision previously reviewed
** This revision already reviewed

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  Erik Kline
  Jouni Korhonen
  Paul Kyzivat
  Matthew Miller
  Suhas Nandakumar
  Francesca Palombini
  Pete Resnick
  Ines Robles
  Dan Romascanu
  David Schinazi

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[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt

[Francis Dupont]

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Document: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190918
IETF LC End Date: 20190925
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - 1.1 page 3: add RFC 8174 with RFC 2119

 - 3 page 4 figure 1 and many other: if you have some control on page
  formatting please try to put short figure on one page, and to not leave
  for instance a section title alone at the end of a page. Note that
  anyway the RFC Editor should fix that...

 - 3.1 page 5: possible TCVCIS -> TSVCIS?

 - 5 page 16: spurious space / bad indent at
  " No SDP negotiations are required."

 - 6 page 16: errored -> ?

 - 9 page 17: the RFC Editor Considerations just says that the RFC Editor
  may remove it? Looks like a place-holder...

Regards

francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

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