Re: [Gen-art] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-09

2020-07-08 Thread Harlan Stenn
Ah, I understand - thanks, no worries. H On 7/8/2020 6:47 AM, Vijay Gurbani wrote: > Ah, I reviewed version 8, which had an intended status of Historic.  As > I was nearing the end of the document, -09 was released.  Instead of > reading -09 all over again, I read the diffs between -08 and -09. 

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7030est-clarify-08

2020-07-08 Thread Russ Housley
Ines: Thanks for the very carful review. I'll tackle the ones about the ASN.1... > 4- Appendix A: In id-aa-asymmDecryptKeyID OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= {...} > > 4.1- pkcs9(9) should be pkcs-9(9) ? Both are used in different modules. They have become synonyms. That said, we should pick one,

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7030est-clarify-08

2020-07-08 Thread Ines Robles via Datatracker
Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-13

2020-07-08 Thread Alissa Cooper
Meral, thanks for your review. All, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jun 27, 2020, at 4:08 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Meral, > > Thank you for the review. > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > > De : Meral Shirazipour

Re: [Gen-art] [nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-07

2020-07-08 Thread Alissa Cooper
Dale, thanks for your review. All, thanks for addressing Dale’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jun 8, 2020, at 10:12 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote: > > Chuck Lever writes: >>> On May 29, 2020, at 9:44 PM, wor...@ariadne.com wrote: >>> These changes look sufficient to me.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-13

2020-07-08 Thread Alissa Cooper
Robert, thanks for your review. Huaimo, thanks for addressing Robert’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jun 12, 2020, at 11:49 AM, Huaimo Chen wrote: > > Hi Robert, > > Thank you very much for your suggestion. > We have updated the document (version 16

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12

2020-07-08 Thread Alissa Cooper
Thanks Brian. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jun 6, 2020, at 11:58 PM, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review result: Ready > > Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer

Re: [Gen-art] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-09

2020-07-08 Thread Karen O'Donoghue
Thank you Vijay, The resolution of some of the last call comments was to change the intended status to Informational. I don’t see a need to re-issue the review if others do not. Karen From: Vijay Gurbani Date: Wednesday, July 8, 2020 at 9:48 AM To: Harlan Stenn Cc: "gen-art >> General area

Re: [Gen-art] [Ntp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-mode-6-cmds-09

2020-07-08 Thread Vijay Gurbani
Ah, I reviewed version 8, which had an intended status of Historic. As I was nearing the end of the document, -09 was released. Instead of reading -09 all over again, I read the diffs between -08 and -09. Looks like the intended status was changed to Informational in -09, and this change, while

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-08

2020-07-08 Thread Stewart Bryant
> On 30 Jun 2020, at 17:55, Pete Resnick wrote: > > On 30 Jun 2020, at 7:24, Stewart Bryant wrote: > >>> On 29 Jun 2020, at 18:30, Pete Resnick via Datatracker >>> wrote: >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> >>> It is not clear to me why this is being sent for Informational instead of >>> Proposed