[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-servprovider-oob-05

2024-03-28 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

2024-02-16 Thread Joel Halpern
s.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-bier-tether-04=draft-ietf-bier-tether-05=--html Thanks. Jeffrey Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message----- From: Joel Halpern Sent: Thursday, February 15, 2024 11:27 PM To: Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: b...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-b

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

2024-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern
, that is the point.  It just works.) Yours, Joel On 2/15/2024 11:04 PM, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review and comments. Please see zzh> below. Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message- From: BIER On Behalf Of Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Thursday, February

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-tether-04

2024-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao-06

2024-02-01 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08

2023-12-20 Thread Joel Halpern
in the introduction as well, we can fix it with the RFC editor. Thanks & Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Tuesday, December 19, 2023 3:39 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: det...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org Sub

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08

2023-12-19 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05

2023-11-30 Thread Joel Halpern
, 2023 4:23 PM To: Joel Halpern ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: b...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast@ietf.org Subject: RE: Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05 Hi Joel, Thanks for your review and comments. I will address them and come back. Jeffrey -Original Message

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09

2023-11-12 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05

2023-10-23 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is a requested genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-multicast-05 Prepared on 23-Oct-2023 Summary: This draft is not ready, having a number of issues that need to be addressed. I presume this draft will be socialized with the PIM

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lake-traces-06

2023-09-03 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-pbb-evpn-isid-cmacflush-07

2023-06-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-11

2023-05-29 Thread Joel Halpern
.txt Please see replies inline with On Mon, May 8, 2023 at 7:42 PM Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-11

2023-05-08 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

2023-03-17 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11

2023-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern
cell kvau...@trevilon.com www.trevilon.com <http://www.trevilon.com/> On Feb 9, 2023, at 6:56 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11

2023-02-09 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-pti-pen-registration-09

2022-11-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-sieve-action-registry-04

2022-11-02 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-14

2022-10-14 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08

2022-10-07 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-v2-05

2022-09-29 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-29 Thread Joel Halpern
objects. Note an IETF MIB model for IPsec was never standardized however the structures here could be adapted to existing MIB implementations. Doses that suffice? Thanks Don -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker Sent: Wednesday, September 21, 2022 6:50 PM To: gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-08

2022-09-24 Thread Joel Halpern
and clarifications inline @SB On Wed, Jun 29, 2022 at 1:39 AM Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04

2022-09-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06

2022-07-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-08

2022-06-28 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-8410-ku-clarifications-01

2022-05-03 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-uberti-rtcweb-rfc8829bis-02

2022-03-27 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-rfc9127-bis-01

2022-01-26 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-07

2021-11-24 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7484bis-04

2021-10-06 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

2021-07-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

2021-05-17 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thank you Lada. I had missed the union, reading the introductory material with more attention. Glad to hear IANA did an early review. Yours, Joel On 5/17/2021 8:25 AM, Ladislav Lhotka wrote: Hi Joel, thanks for the review, please see my responses below. Joel Halpern via Datatracker writes

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

2021-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-20

2021-03-19 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-19

2021-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-04

2021-01-28 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08

2020-12-06 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-invariants-11

2020-10-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-30

2020-09-24 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-mdn-15

2020-09-11 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-16

2020-07-13 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08

2020-05-16 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14

2020-03-18 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-vpls-multihoming-05

2020-03-18 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-eval-criteria-11

2020-02-13 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-kucherawy-rfc8478bis-03

2019-12-26 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-ra-pref64-07

2019-11-08 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-initial-registry-12

2019-11-03 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Thanks Al. I presumed all the ducks were in a row, but thought I should ask to be certain. Yours, Joel On 11/3/2019 3:14 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review, please see replies below. Al -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker [mailto:nore

Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

2019-10-15 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
If we do not have agreement on what the meaning is for the relevant terms, then either 1) The document should not be an IETF consensus document (which even Informational publication is) or 2) The document should be Experimental, indicating explicitly that there is ambiguity in the terms, and

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

2019-10-10 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-implicit-iv-07

2019-09-27 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sipcore-callinfo-spam-04

2019-09-08 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-klensin-idna-unicode-review-02

2019-08-08 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-nada-11

2019-08-05 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [babel] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

2019-07-07 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
I do not consider this a show-stopper (I listed it as a nit / editorial), but at least the -07 text does not look better in this regard. In my experience, if this were indeed mathematics, one would talk about a metric (how one measures) and a distance (the result of applying the measure.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06

2019-06-24 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-11

2019-06-24 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24

2019-06-06 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-hash-of-root-key-cert-extn-05

2019-05-21 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-23

2019-05-17 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

2019-04-06 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08

2019-03-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-09

2019-03-07 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trans-rfc6962-bis-31

2019-03-01 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

2019-02-07 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-hash-of-root-key-cert-extn-03

2019-01-04 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-01

2018-12-03 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11

2018-11-29 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-14

2018-10-18 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08

2018-10-11 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

2018-10-03 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-08

2018-09-21 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07

2018-09-14 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06

2018-08-11 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
if this is inappropriate, in which case I repost with that list on. Inline... On 10/08/2018 10:00, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06

2018-08-09 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-14

2018-07-26 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-12

2018-07-26 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-13

2018-07-19 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-11

2018-07-05 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10

2018-06-28 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10

2018-06-15 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-12

2018-06-07 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-21 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
version, which I plan to send out in the next few days Ahmed On 5/14/18 1:01 PM, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
cking. I leave it to the draft authors to resolve this issue with you. Les -Original Message- From: Joel Halpern Direct <jmh.dir...@joelhalpern.com> Sent: Monday, May 14, 2018 1:16 PM To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsb...@cisco.com>; Joel Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com>

Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Behalf Of Joel Halpern Sent: Monday, May 14, 2018 1:01 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop@ietf.org; spr...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org Subject: [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing- ldp-interop-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

2018-05-14 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03

2018-04-26 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-02

2018-04-19 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-06

2018-04-13 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is both a gen-art re-review and a routing directorate requested review. The revisions from draft-04 to -06 show some improvement. However, I still have serious problems with this work. The primary problem is that this seems to violate

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-18

2018-04-05 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19

2018-04-05 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-smtp-tlsrpt-17

2018-03-08 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-04

2018-02-28 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
nd what behavior is expected of the router (not just "the same > as that over there.") > Yours, > Joel > On 2/11/18 1:32 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote: >  > Hi Joel, >  > >  > Thanks for your review com

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-vendor-channel-00

2018-02-26 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08

2018-02-24 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: On the Right Track I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

2018-02-23 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
an Yours, Joel On 2/23/18 5:26 AM, Göran Selander wrote: Hi Joel, Thanks for your review. Comments inline. On 2018-02-22 04:51, "Joel Halpern" <j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for th

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

2018-02-21 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

2018-02-17 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

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