Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15

[Alissa Cooper]

Meral, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your response. I have 
entered an Abstain ballot on this document based on my own re-review.

Alissa

> On Jan 26, 2018, at 8:32 PM, Meral Shirazipour 
>  wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review 
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> Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2018-01-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08
>  
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational  RFC .
>  
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> -few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive"
> -[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built ">"were built "
> -[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2
> -[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible"
> -[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted "
> -[Page 31], "rasises">"raises", "encyption">"encryption", 
> "visibilty"--->"visibility"
>  
> Best Regards,
> Meral
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> Ericsson Research
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15

[MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)]

Thanks Meral, we'll make these edits in the
working version.

Kathleen and Al

From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com]
Sent: Friday, January 26, 2018 8:32 PM
To: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team 
(Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF 
Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before 
posting a new version of the draft.

For more information, please see the FAQ at 
.

Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-01-26
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational  RFC .

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive"
-[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built ">"were built "
-[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2
-[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible"
-[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted "
-[Page 31], "rasises">"raises", "encyption">"encryption", 
"visibilty"--->"visibility"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com
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