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draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
Hi,
I submitted a new version (-05) of the draft, with the new title.
Regards,
Christer
From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com]
ubject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
Hi,
>I was just having a look at the updated draft - the changes are fine AFAICS.
>
>However, looking at it again, I think a more informative title would not go
>>amiss. How about:
>
> Clarifications to SD
;>
Date: 16/09/2016 23:45 (GMT+00:00)
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Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
Hi Christer.
Thanks. That's fine.
Cheers,Elwyn
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Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
Hi Elwyn,
Thanks for your review! Please see inline.
Nits/editorial comments:
>s3.1: It is a bit pedantic, but 'to be sure, to be sure', add new first line:
> In the rest of this section references t
