RE: Planned changes to registration payments & deadlines

2018-04-24 Thread Roni Even (A)
is it important to pay when you register if the fee is based on the payment day? Roni Even -Original Message- From: ietf [mailto:ietf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Andrew Sullivan Sent: Monday, April 23, 2018 7:20 PM To: i...@ietf.org; ietf-announce@ietf.org Subject: Planned changes

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12

2013-10-13 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-10-12 IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-16 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-08

2013-09-07 Thread Roni Even
...@gmail.com] Sent: 07 September, 2013 10:41 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-repute-model@tools.ietf.org; ietf; General Area Review Team Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-08 Hi Roni, sorry again for the delay. On Sat, Aug 31, 2013 at 4:27 AM, Roni Even ron.even

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-08

2013-08-31 Thread Roni Even
in the document. Roni Even I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-29 Thread Roni Even
other email Roni -Original Message- From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.c...@huawei.com] Sent: 29 August, 2013 11:33 AM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp- ping@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-29 Thread Roni Even
Roni -Original Message- From: Mach Chen [mailto:mach.c...@huawei.com] Sent: 29 August, 2013 1:05 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp- ping@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-29 Thread Roni Even
Hi, This is OK . I have no concerns Roni -Original Message- From: Loa Andersson [mailto:l...@pi.nu] Sent: 29 August, 2013 2:46 PM To: Roni Even Cc: 'Mach Chen'; draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp- ping@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART

RE: Gen-ART LC review ofdraft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-29 Thread Roni Even
of section 2 and I am not sure that the return path ping is influenced since it does not use all the sub-tlv from tlv type 1 so it should be a separate registry Roni -Original Message- From: t.p. [mailto:daedu...@btconnect.com] Sent: 29 August, 2013 6:33 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-mpls-return

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-28 Thread Roni Even
-ping-12 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-8-28 IETF LC End Date: 2013-9-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I am not clear on the sub-TLV in section 6.2 1. If a new sub-TLV

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping-12

2013-08-28 Thread Roni Even
Hi Loa, See inline Roni -Original Message- From: Loa Andersson [mailto:l...@pi.nu] Sent: 28 August, 2013 5:20 PM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-mpls-return-path-specified-lsp-ping@tools.ietf.org; gen- a...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-model-07

2013-08-21 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-repute-model-07 Reviewer: Roni

Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-allen-dispatch-imei-urn-as-instanceid-10

2013-08-05 Thread Roni Even
-as-instanceid-10 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-8-5 IETF LC End Date: 2013-8-16 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Why is it going to be an Informational RFC, considering that there is a lot

Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02

2013-06-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2013-6-30 IETF LC End Date: 2013-7-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What about TLS 1.2 usage

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pkix-est-07

2013-06-22 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pkix-est-07 Reviewer: Roni

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

2013-06-04 Thread Roni Even
my answer below prefixed with [SV]. From: ext Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: 29. toukokuuta 2013 21:13 To: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

2013-06-03 Thread Roni Even
Roni, Please see my answer below prefixed with [SV]. From: ext Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: 29. toukokuuta 2013 21:13 To: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

2013-05-29 Thread Roni Even
-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-5-29 IETF LC End Date: 2013-6-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I can understand from the draft that when you have IP and PSTN nettype

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-interfaces-cfg-10

2013-04-29 Thread Roni Even
of draft-ietf-netmod-interfaces-cfg-10 Hi, Roni Even ron.even@gmail.com wrote: Martin, Thanks for the response. I am OK with your responses to the nits. As for the comment on location I think I understand but what got me thinking was the examples. In E.1 An operator can configure a new

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-interfaces-cfg-10

2013-04-28 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-4-28 IETF LC End Date: 2013-5-3 IESG Telechat date: 2013-5-16 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I had some problem understanding the location leaf. Section 3.2 has

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-interfaces-cfg-10

2013-04-28 Thread Roni Even
. Comments inline. Roni Even ron.even@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-implications-on-ipv4-nets-03

2013-04-06 Thread Roni Even
-nets-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-4-6 IETF LC End Date: 2013-4-12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. I found this draft very informational but I

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-implications-on-ipv4-nets-03

2013-04-06 Thread Roni Even
-nets-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-4-6 IETF LC End Date: 2013-4-12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. I found this draft very informational but I

GenART LC review of draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03

2013-03-25 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-3-25 IETF LC End Date: 2013-3-26 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In table 1 the Transform ID are specified as TBD1 to TBD4. I noticed that IANA

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04

2013-02-11 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04 Reviewer: Roni

Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-brainpool-ike-groups-04

2013-02-06 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-2-13 IETF LC End Date: 2013-2-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:

Gen-ART LC review of draft-gp-obsolete-icmp-types-iana-01

2013-01-21 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-1-21 IETF LC End Date: 2013-2-14 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-rmt-fcast-07

2013-01-15 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2013-1-15 IETF LC End Date: 2013-1-22 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I had some problem when reading the document about what is mandatory to support

Gen-ART LC review of draft-daboo-ical-vcard-parameter-encoding-02

2012-12-16 Thread Roni Even
-encoding-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-12-17 IETF LC End Date: 2012-12-14 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08

2012-12-15 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-12-16 IETF LC End Date: 2012-12-25 IESG Telechat date: 2013-1-10 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. The document has as the intended status Informational while the last call says

Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-10-17 IETF LC End Date: 2012-11-6 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. It is not clear from the draft what the use case for using the group construct

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis-05

2012-10-17 Thread Roni Even
Andy, Thanks Roni From: Malis, Andrew G (Andy) [mailto:andrew.g.ma...@verizon.com] Sent: 09 October, 2012 2:55 AM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org; Malis, Andrew G (Andy) Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ccamp

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis-05

2012-10-09 Thread Roni Even
Andy, Thanks, I am OK Roni From: Malis, Andrew G (Andy) [mailto:andrew.g.ma...@verizon.com] Sent: 09 October, 2012 2:55 AM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis@tools.ietf.org Cc: ietf@ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org; Malis, Andrew G (Andy) Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-05

2012-09-25 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-9-25 IETF LC End Date: 2012-10-3 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.1 Duplicate Address Dectection should

RE: Proposed IETF Meeting Calendar 2018 - 2022

2012-09-07 Thread Roni Even
Hi, One request about IETF 110 21 - 26 March 2021. March 27 is Jewish Passover (Pesach) so the 26th will not work for those who observe this major Holiday Roni Even From: wgchairs-boun...@ietf.org [wgchairs-boun...@ietf.org] on behalf of IETF

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sieve-imap-sieve-06

2012-08-23 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-8-22 IETF LC End Date: 2012-8-29 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. At the end of section 3.7 and 3.8 acton should

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc5787bis-05

2012-08-13 Thread Roni Even
. Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-8-12 IETF LC End Date: 2012-8-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 6.1 If specified more than once, instances preceding the first

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-ipfix-ie-doctors-03

2012-07-15 Thread Roni Even
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-ie-doctors-03. Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-7-15 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication

genART review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-09

2012-07-15 Thread Roni Even
-in-ipfix-09 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-7-15 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues:

GenART LC review of draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02

2012-06-28 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-6-28 IETF LC End Date: 2012-7-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In the section 2 the second sentence is The initial content for the Tao web page will come from

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls-05

2012-06-19 Thread Roni Even
should be specified since it appears as Reserved in the registry. I have no specific suggestion Roni From: Paul Sangster [mailto:paul_sangs...@symantec.com] Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2012 7:56 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls@tools.ietf.org Cc: 'IETF'; gen-...@ietf.org; n

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-tls-05

2012-06-04 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2012-6-4 IETF LC End Date: 2012-6-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 3.2 Therefore, this specification requests the IANA reserve a TCP port number

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05

2012-05-29 Thread Roni Even
Hi Benoit, Your proposals are OK with me Roni From: Benoit Claise [mailto:bcla...@cisco.com] Sent: Wednesday, May 30, 2012 2:11 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org; 'IETF'; me Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05

2012-05-23 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-claise-export-application-info-in-ipfix-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-4-7 IETF LC End Date: 2012-4-17 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In sections 2, 4.1 (PANA-L7), 5

Gen-ART LC review of draft-melnikov-smtp-priority-13

2012-05-20 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-5-20 IETF LC End Date: 2012-5-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. MUA is used but not expanded.

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-02

2012-04-01 Thread Roni Even
. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-4-1 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-30 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 4 However

RE: [AVTCORE] IPR requirements in document write-up

2012-03-21 Thread Roni Even
suggest you ask it in a way that allows you to accurately answer the question asked in the PROTO template. Barry, incoming Applications AD Original Message From: Stephan Wenger [mailto:st...@stewe.org] Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2012 7:03 PM To: Roni Even; 'IETF AVTCore

GenART last call review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03

2012-03-13 Thread Roni Even
-analysis-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-3-13 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-22 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 5.1.1 third paragraph change to provided by some

Gen-ART LC review of draft-melnikov-smtp-priority-09

2012-03-13 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-3-13 IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 4.2 In absence of both the MT-PRIORITY MAIL FROM parameter

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-3-in-1-encoding-08

2012-02-22 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-2-23 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 1 4th paragraph tunnelling

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsext-ecdsa-04

2012-01-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2012-1-29 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-7 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: The first IANA action is to update http://www.iana.org/assignments/ds-rr-types/ds-rr-types.txt which requires

Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06

2012-01-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-1-24 IETF LC End Date: 2012-2-14 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Section 2 bullet 3 Securty? 2. In section

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-13 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I am OK with minor issue 2 now. Issue 3 was my only point Roni -Original Message- From: Kireeti Kompella [mailto:kire...@juniper.net] Sent: Friday, January 13, 2012 7:36 PM To: Roni Even Cc: Kireeti Kompella; draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2012-01-12 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I looked at the 08 version and the major issues are addressed. What about minor issue number 3? Roni Even -Original Message- From: Kireeti Kompella [mailto:kire...@juniper.net] Sent: Friday, September 16, 2011 10:23 PM To: Roni Even Cc: Kireeti Kompella; draft-kompella-l2vpn

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14

2012-01-01 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2012-1-1 IETF LC End Date: 2012-1-4 IESG Telechat date: 2012-1-5 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3.2 Type and VSS Information -- see

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-mib

2011-11-20 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-11-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-29 IESG Telechat date: 2011-12-1 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: The last sentence in section 5.10 (TBD ...) hints

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-02

2011-10-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-23 IESG Telechat date: 2011-12-1 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-csi-dhcpv6-cga-ps-07

2011-10-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: I do not have any editorial issues but I am not sure about the value of the document. I saw the IESG

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mip4-nemo-haaro-06

2011-10-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-31 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. The IANA section is not clear. It talks about three new tables

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00

2011-10-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-20 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I noticed that the example in section 3

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-03 Thread Roni Even
/* MIME parts). There has not been any report of interoperability problems as a result. This factored into the working group's consensus. -MSK From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] Sent: Sunday, October 02, 2011 10:51 PM To: Murray S. Kucherawy; draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis

RE: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-02 Thread Roni Even
other behavior. Can the sender of the report know if it can send the report in another multipart MIME message. Thanks Roni Even From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:m...@cloudmark.com] Sent: Monday, October 03, 2011 7:29 AM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen

GenART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc3462bis-01

2011-10-01 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-10-1 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I noticed that the major change from RFC 3462 in the current version is to remove

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-drinks-usecases-requirements-06

2011-09-29 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-9-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-3 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments

RE: [payload] [Payload] Last Call: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt (RTP Payload Format for DV (IEC 61834) Video)) to Proposed Standard

2011-09-26 Thread Roni Even
Hi Qin, Thanks for the review see inline Roni From: payload-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:payload-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Qin Wu Sent: Tuesday, September 20, 2011 9:16 AM To: ietf@ietf.org Cc: payl...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [payload] [Payload] Last Call: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt

Gen-ART LC review of draft-kompella-l2vpn-l2vpn-07

2011-09-07 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-9-7 IETF LC End Date: 2011-9-27 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is not ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: The IANA considerations section says: the values already allocated are in Table 1 of Section 4. The allocation

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-geomrt-05

2011-08-19 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-8-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-26 IESG Telechat date: 2011-8-25 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Section 5 This section is to aide should

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-23

2011-08-16 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011-8-16 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I find that the document provides in depth testing procedures and reporting. What I

Gen-ART last call review of draft-yevstifeyev-ion-report-06

2011-07-30 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-7-31 IETF LC End Date: 2011-8-9 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: I read in section 3.2 The IESG has determined that IONs will not be used in the future

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6man-flow-3697bis-05

2011-07-06 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-7-6 IETF LC End Date: 2011-7-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. One nit Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 3 fifth paragraph An alternative approach

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-roll-of0-14

2011-06-27 Thread Roni Even
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-roll-of0-14 Reviewer: Roni

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ftpext2-hosts-02

2011-06-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-6-21 IETF LC End Date: 2011-6-30 IESG Telechat date: 2011-6-30 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: ___ Ietf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-faltstrom-5892bis-04

2011-05-29 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-5-29 IETF LC End Date: 2011-6-6 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: 1. I am not sure how the IANA consideration section is in-line with the IANA consideration section of RFC5892

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

2011-05-24 Thread Roni Even
-09 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-5-24 IETF LC End Date: 2011-5-30 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Need to expand LDP when first mentioned. 2

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

2011-05-24 Thread Roni Even
Farrel [mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk] Sent: Tuesday, May 24, 2011 1:16 PM To: 'Roni Even'; draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced- dsmap@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen-...@ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced- dsmap-09 Thanks Roni, Nits

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-grow-geomrt-01

2011-04-26 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-26 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-29 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: This is more out of curiosity 1. Why not include it in draft-ietf-grow-mrt-14 2. Why

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

2011-04-22 Thread Roni Even
may not find an interoperable mode. If the initiator will use none technique than you will have interoperability. Roni -Original Message- From: Dan Harkins [mailto:dhark...@lounge.org] Sent: Friday, April 22, 2011 3:39 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth

Gen-ART LC review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-03

2011-04-11 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-11 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 8.5 and 8.6 the draft says that If no more password pre-processing

GEn-ART last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-dual-stack-lite-07

2011-04-11 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-4-10 IETF LC End Date: 2011-4-12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as standard track RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 8.3 NAT-44 appears without

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community-07

2011-04-09 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I reviewed version 7 and all my comments were addressed. Roni Even -Original Message- From: Paul Hoffman [mailto:paul.hoff...@vpnc.org] Sent: Friday, March 11, 2011 6:08 AM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community@tools.ietf.org; gen- a...@ietf.org; 'IETF

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-community-06

2011-03-10 Thread Roni Even
-community-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-3-10 IETF LC End Date: 2011-3-18 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 1 The returned list of I-Ds and/or RFCs includes five

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

2011-03-07 Thread Roni Even
Hi, My impression from reading the document and according to figure 1 was that all end host communication was done in a UDP tunnel. So what is the relation of the TCP connection to BTMM. Roni Even From: Lixia Zhang [mailto:li...@cs.ucla.edu] Sent: Sunday, March 06, 2011 7:52 AM To: Roni

Gen-ART LC review of draft-zhu-mobileme-doc-04

2011-03-04 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2011-3-4 IETF LC End Date: 2011-3-18 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 5 and in section 6.1 second bullet you mention that the end to end connection is TCP

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-morg-multimailbox-search-06

2011-02-22 Thread Roni Even
-search-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-morg-multimailbox-search-06

2011-02-20 Thread Roni Even
-search-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api-15

2011-02-06 Thread Roni Even
Hi Shinta, I am OK with all your proposals Thanks Roni -Original Message- From: Shinta Sugimoto [mailto:shi...@sfc.wide.ad.jp] Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2011 3:29 PM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api@tools.ietf.org; gen- a...@ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api-15

2011-02-01 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-2-1 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 8.2 the path exploration parameters are different from RFC 5534

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-14

2011-01-31 Thread Roni Even
Yaakov, Yes this is what I mean Roni From: Yaakov Stein [mailto:yaako...@rad.com] Sent: Thursday, January 27, 2011 5:47 PM To: Roni Even; draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org Cc: 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map

Gen-ART LC review of draft-arkko-dual-stack-extra-lite

2011-01-24 Thread Roni Even
-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-24 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication. Major issues: Minor issues: This document has a standard track intended status. It looks to me more of informational type. Nits

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pwe3-oam-msg-map-14

2011-01-24 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-23 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-24 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. The document starts with Contributors

Gen-ART LC review of draft-turner-ekpct-algs-update-02

2011-01-23 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2011-1-23 IETF LC End Date: 2011-2-8 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: none Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None ___ Ietf

RE: Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary

2011-01-02 Thread Roni Even
Hi Karl, I looked at the 05 version and it does not look like you fixed the nits Roni From: Karl Heinz Wolf [mailto:karlheinz.w...@nic.at] Sent: Friday, December 17, 2010 10:28 AM To: Roni Even; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary@tools.ietf.org Cc: IETF

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipcore-keep-10

2011-01-01 Thread Roni Even
Hi Christer, I am OK with all your responses regards Roni -Original Message- From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com] Sent: Saturday, January 01, 2011 12:20 PM To: Roni Even; gen-...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-sipcore- keep@tools.ietf.org Cc: 'IETF-Discussion

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sipcore-keep-10

2010-12-28 Thread Roni Even
: Roni Even Review Date:2010-12-28 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-5 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In the document you mention that the keep alive can be negotiated in each direction. I

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-roll-routing-metrics-14

2010-12-20 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-12-20 IETF LC End Date: 2011-1-5 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Standard track RFC. Major issues: No Major issues Minor issues: 1. In section 2.1 after figure 1 you specify the different fields

Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary

2010-12-04 Thread Roni Even
-servicelistboundary-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-12-04 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There are some nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1

RE: Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-11-29 Thread Roni Even
Hi Joe, Thanks Inline Roni -Original Message- From: Joe Salowey [mailto:jsalo...@cisco.com] Sent: Monday, November 29, 2010 7:42 AM To: Roni Even Cc: 'General Area Review Team'; draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel- req@tools.ietf.org; 'IETF-Discussion list' Subject: Re: Gen-ART last call

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane-04

2010-11-28 Thread Roni Even
-control-plane-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2010-11-28 IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-3 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. There are some nits and minor issue. Major issues: Minor issues: The example in appendix

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane-04

2010-11-28 Thread Roni Even
- From: Rodney Dunn [mailto:rod...@cisco.com] Sent: Sunday, November 28, 2010 6:09 PM To: Joel Jaeggli Cc: Roni Even; General Area Review Team; IETF-Discussion list; draft- ietf-opsec-protect-control-plane@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-protect-control- plane

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-11-27 Thread Roni Even
Hi, I sent the following review on October 25th but did not see and response. Roni Even I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments

Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-08

2010-10-26 Thread Roni Even
Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2010-10-25 IETF LC End Date: 2010-11-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. In section 2 why not reference RFC 2119 or at least copy the definition from

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