RE: Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

2009-10-05 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
-Discussion list; Jari Arkko; marc...@it.uc3m.es; Julien Laganier Subject: Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10) Hi, This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext

Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

2009-10-05 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi, This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding- revocation, updated based on revision 13 of that draft. This revision addresses all of my substantive issues, and most of the editorial issues. I had one outstanding minor editorial comment where the author proposed a

Re: [Gen-art] Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

2009-10-05 Thread Ben Campbell
(was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10) Hi, This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding- revocation, updated based on revision 13 of that draft. This revision addresses all of my substantive issues, and most of the editorial issues. I had

RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-17 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
:06 PM To: 'Ben Campbell' Cc: Khalil, Mohamed (RICH2:2S20); sgund...@cisco.com; pyeg...@juniper.net; General Area Review Team; ietf@ietf.org; Jari Arkko; marc...@it.uc3m.es; Laganier, Julien Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 Hi Ben, I

RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-17 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
) Cc: Khalil, Mohamed (RICH2:2S20); sgund...@cisco.com; pyeg...@juniper.net; General Area Review Team; ietf@ietf.org; Jari Arkko; marc...@it.uc3m.es; Laganier, Julien Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 Hi Ahmad, I guess that's okay

Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-16 Thread Ben Campbell
, Mohamed (RICH2:2S20); sgund...@cisco.com; pyeg...@juniper.net; General Area Review Team; ietf@ietf.org; Jari Arkko; marc...@it.uc3m.es; Laganier, Julien Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 Hi Ben, I am fine with your proposed text. Many thanks for your

RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-15 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
...@cisco.com; pyeg...@juniper.net; General Area Review Team; ietf@ietf.org; Jari Arkko; marc...@it.uc3m.es; Laganier, Julien Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 Hi Ahmad, Please see inline for my suggested text for the retransmission

RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-14 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
Hi Ben, Hopefully we can close on all of the open issues. Please see inline. Regards, Ahmad -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@estacado.net] Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 This is a followup on revision 12

Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-14 Thread Ben Campbell
-Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@estacado.net] Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 This is a followup on revision 12, since it came out before I got to revision 11: Overall, I think this revision is much better. Most of my

Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-11 Thread Ben Campbell
On Sep 10, 2009, at 5:35 PM, Ahmad Muhanna wrote: Hi Ben, Thanks for the follow up. Please see answers inline. Regards, Ahmad -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@estacado.net] Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

RE: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-11 Thread Ahmad Muhanna
Hi Ben, Thanks for the follow up. Please see answers inline. Regards, Ahmad -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@estacado.net] Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10 This is a followup on revision 12, since it came

Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10

2009-09-11 Thread Ben Campbell
This is a followup on revision 12, since it came out before I got to revision 11: Overall, I think this revision is much better. Most of my concerns have been addressed, but I have a few minor ones remaining. Specific comments: -- Section 10.1, 2nd bullet: I don't think we resolved my