Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-27 Thread Ryuji Wakikawa
Elwyn and Jari, Thanks for your detail review. I'll prepare for my reply and modify the documents ASAP. ryuji On 2008/11/25, at 12:53, Jari Arkko wrote: Elwyn, Thank you for the in-depth review! Authors, when will you be addressing these issues? Jari Elwyn Davies wrote: I have been selec

Gen-art review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-25 Thread Elwyn Davies
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mon

Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-24 Thread Jari Arkko
Elwyn, Thank you for the in-depth review! Authors, when will you be addressing these issues? Jari Elwyn Davies wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FA

Gen-art review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-24 Thread Elwyn Davies
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mon

Re: Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-18 Thread Ryuji Wakikawa
Hello Bernard, Thanks for your review. It's good to know there is no issues specific to this document. thanks, ryuji On 2008/11/17, at 13:06, Bernard Aboba wrote: Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area dir

Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt

2008-11-18 Thread Bernard Aboba
Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's aut