Elwyn and Jari,
Thanks for your detail review.
I'll prepare for my reply and modify the documents ASAP.
ryuji
On 2008/11/25, at 12:53, Jari Arkko wrote:
Elwyn,
Thank you for the in-depth review!
Authors, when will you be addressing these issues?
Jari
Elwyn Davies wrote:
I have been selec
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
_http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mon
Elwyn,
Thank you for the in-depth review!
Authors, when will you be addressing these issues?
Jari
Elwyn Davies wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
_http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FA
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
_http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mon
Hello Bernard,
Thanks for your review.
It's good to know there is no issues specific to this document.
thanks,
ryuji
On 2008/11/17, at 13:06, Bernard Aboba wrote:
Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area
dir
Review of draft-ietf-monami6-multiplecoa-10.txt
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's aut