[lace-chat] Re: Writing (was: Editing )

2006-02-15 Thread Lynn Carpenter
When I was in college, we were sternly told that when we described our lab work, it should always be in the impersonal and passive voice. Thus Fifty-seven cubic centimeters of water were added to the soil mixture containing three varieties of petunia seed. Hey! Wake up! No snoring on

Re: [lace-chat] Re: Writing (was: Editing )

2006-02-15 Thread Helen
As a Physics student, I have always written all of my reports in the passive voice (and ignored the grammar checks that tell me that tell me off for doing so :o) ) However, recently, schools have been encouraged to get down if certain sections are in the passive voice. I find it very hard to

[lace-chat] Re: Writing (was: Editing )

2006-02-15 Thread Joy Beeson
As the smallest child in the family of 5, her brothers often made her the victim of their practical jokes This states firmly that her brothers are the smallest child. I'm not at all sure how a set of brothers can be the smallest child, but that's what the sentence *says*. I think my