Re: [Lsr] WG AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

2024-03-12 Thread Yingzhen Qu
Les, thanks for the reminder.

Liyan, you can post the WG version with a file name as Les suggested. Like
Chris mentioned, X can replace Y. If you run into issues, please let us
know.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

On Tue, Mar 12, 2024 at 9:38 PM Christian Hopps  wrote:

> I am not aware of any "inherited" requirement. We link documents (X
> replaces Y) in the datatracker by choosing whatever document we want as
> "replaces". You can post the document with whatever name changes you want
> and the chairs can either accept it and it gets posted or not.
>
> Thanks,
> Chris.
>
> > On Mar 12, 2024, at 23:26, Liyan Gong  wrote:
> >
> > Hi Yingzhen,Les and WG,
> >
> > Thank you. The first version will be updated soon with the name
> draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link since the first version name needs to
> be inherited.
> > The proposed name will be reflected in later versions. Thank you Les for
> your good suggestion. It is more apt.
> > Any comments are always welcome.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Liyan
> >
> > 邮件原文
> > 发件人:"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" 
> > 收件人:Yingzhen Qu  ,Liyan Gong <
> gongli...@chinamobile.com>
> > 抄 送: "jie.d...@huawei.com" ,Acee Lindem <
> acee.i...@gmail.com>,Gyan Mishra  ,lsr <
> lsr@ietf.org>,lsr-chairs  ,ketan Talaulikar <
> ketant.i...@gmail.com>
> > 发送时间:2024-03-13 04:27:46
> > 主题:RE: [Lsr] WG
> AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
> >
> >Or – if the authors want to consider my comments – replace
> “unreachable” in the name with something more apt – perhaps:
> >
> > “lsr-ospf-max-link-metric”
> >
> > 
> >
> >Les
> >
> >
> > From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Yingzhen Qu
> > Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2024 1:11 PM
> > To: Liyan Gong 
> > Cc: jie.d...@huawei.com; Acee Lindem ; Gyan Mishra
> ; lsr ; lsr-chairs <
> lsr-cha...@ietf.org>; ketan Talaulikar 
> > Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption
> Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > The adoption call has ended.
> >
> > There is strong consensus, and all the authors and contributors have
> replied to the IPR call thread, so this draft is now adopted.
> >
> > Authors, please upload a WG version with name
> draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link when the datatracker is open.
> >
> > Please continue the discussion to further refine the draft.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Yingzhen
> >
> > On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 7:34PM Liyan Gong 
> wrote:
> > Hi Jie,
> >
> > Thank you for your replies. Please see inline with [Liyan].
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Liyan
> >
> >
> > 邮件原文
> > 发件人:"Dongjie \\(Jimmy\\)" 
> > 收件人:Acee Lindem  ,Liyan Gong  <
> gongli...@chinamobile.com>
> > 抄 送: Gyan Mishra  ,Yingzhen Qu <
> yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>,lsr  ,lsr-chairs <
> lsr-cha...@ietf.org>,ketan Talaulikar  
> > 发送时间:2024-03-11 23:11:49
> > 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption
> Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
> >
> >Hi Acee and Liyan,
> >
> > Please see some replies inline with [Jie] :
> >
> > From: Acee Lindem [mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com]
> > Sent: Sunday, March 10, 2024 5:37 AM
> > To: Liyan Gong 
> > Cc: Gyan Mishra ;  Dongjie (Jimmy) <
> jie.d...@huawei.com>;   Yingzhen Qu ;  lsr <
> lsr@ietf.org>; lsr-chairs ;   ketan Talaulikar <
> ketant.i...@gmail.com>
> > Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call
> -draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
> >
> > All,
> >
> > With respect to the naming of the OSPF constants, I think we should go
> with:
> >
> >  LSLinkInfinity- 0x
> >  MaxReachableLinkMetric - 0xfffe
> >
> > LSLinkInfinity is analogous to LSInfinity.
> >
> > [Jie]  This is OK to me.
> >
> >
> >
> > See inline.
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mar 2, 2024, at 06:16, Liyan Gong  wrote:
> >
> > Hi Gyan and Jie,
> > I am not entirely sure if the suggestions from Ketan in previous email
> can address these two concerns. If not fully addressed, please feel free to
> let us know.
> > Overall, this feature is applicable to all FAs, including FA0. The next
> version will further elaborate on the relationships between new features
> and FAs, as well as optimize the use-case descriptions and corresponding
> name to  reflect "Unreachable"  in a way that is easier to understand.
> > Appreciate everyone's discussion. It is very helpful.
> >
> >
> > [Jie] Thanks, this aligns with my understanding: it applies to all SPF
> computations (including Flexible Algorithms) which make use of IGP metric.
> And  it would be good to replace unreachable with some more accurate
> description.
> > [Liyan]Thanks.I am also considering this matter and hope to get your
> advice. Would it be better to use "Infinity Link" instead of " Unreachable
> Link" for both the content and the title of the draft?
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Liyan
> >
> >
> > 邮件原文
> > 发件人:Gyan Mishra  
> > 收件人:"Dongjie (Jimmy)" 
> > 抄 送: Yingzhen Qu  ,lsr  ,lsr-chairs
> 
> > 发送时间:2024-03-01 11:27:32
> > 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call -
> draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
> > 

Re: [Lsr] WG AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

2024-03-12 Thread Christian Hopps
I am not aware of any "inherited" requirement. We link documents (X replaces Y) 
in the datatracker by choosing whatever document we want as "replaces". You can 
post the document with whatever name changes you want and the chairs can either 
accept it and it gets posted or not.

Thanks,
Chris.

> On Mar 12, 2024, at 23:26, Liyan Gong  wrote:
> 
> Hi Yingzhen,Les and WG,
> 
> Thank you. The first version will be updated soon with the name 
> draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link since the first version name needs to be 
> inherited.
> The proposed name will be reflected in later versions. Thank you Les for your 
> good suggestion. It is more apt.
> Any comments are always welcome. 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Liyan
> 
> 邮件原文
> 发件人:"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" 
> 收件人:Yingzhen Qu  ,Liyan Gong 
> 
> 抄 送: "jie.d...@huawei.com" ,Acee Lindem 
> ,Gyan Mishra  ,lsr 
> ,lsr-chairs  ,ketan Talaulikar 
> 
> 发送时间:2024-03-13 04:27:46
> 主题:RE: [Lsr] WG AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
> 03/08/24)
> 
>Or – if the authors want to consider my comments – replace “unreachable” 
> in the name with something more apt – perhaps:
>  
> “lsr-ospf-max-link-metric”
>  
> 
>  
>Les
>  
>  
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Yingzhen Qu
> Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2024 1:11 PM
> To: Liyan Gong 
> Cc: jie.d...@huawei.com; Acee Lindem ; Gyan Mishra 
> ; lsr ; lsr-chairs 
> ; ketan Talaulikar 
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption 
> Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
>  
> Hi all,
>  
> The adoption call has ended.
>  
> There is strong consensus, and all the authors and contributors have replied 
> to the IPR call thread, so this draft is now adopted. 
>  
> Authors, please upload a WG version with name 
> draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link when the datatracker is open.
>  
> Please continue the discussion to further refine the draft.
>  
> Thanks,
> Yingzhen
>  
> On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 7:34PM Liyan Gong  wrote:
> Hi Jie,
>  
> Thank you for your replies. Please see inline with [Liyan].
>  
> Best Regards,
> Liyan
>  
>  
> 邮件原文
> 发件人:"Dongjie \\(Jimmy\\)" 
> 收件人:Acee Lindem  ,Liyan Gong  
> 抄 送: Gyan Mishra  ,Yingzhen Qu 
> ,lsr  ,lsr-chairs 
> ,ketan Talaulikar  
> 发送时间:2024-03-11 23:11:49
> 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
> 03/08/24)
> 
>Hi Acee and Liyan, 
>  
> Please see some replies inline with [Jie] :
>  
> From: Acee Lindem [mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com] 
> Sent: Sunday, March 10, 2024 5:37 AM
> To: Liyan Gong 
> Cc: Gyan Mishra ;  Dongjie (Jimmy) 
> ;   Yingzhen Qu ;  lsr 
> ; lsr-chairs ;   ketan Talaulikar 
> 
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call 
> -draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
>  
> All, 
>  
> With respect to the naming of the OSPF constants, I think we should go with: 
>  
>  LSLinkInfinity- 0x 
>  MaxReachableLinkMetric - 0xfffe
>  
> LSLinkInfinity is analogous to LSInfinity. 
>  
> [Jie]  This is OK to me. 
>  
>  
>  
> See inline. 
>  
>
>  
> On Mar 2, 2024, at 06:16, Liyan Gong  wrote:
>  
> Hi Gyan and Jie,
> I am not entirely sure if the suggestions from Ketan in previous email can 
> address these two concerns. If not fully addressed, please feel free to let 
> us know. 
> Overall, this feature is applicable to all FAs, including FA0. The next 
> version will further elaborate on the relationships between new features and 
> FAs, as well as optimize the use-case descriptions and corresponding name to  
> reflect "Unreachable"  in a way that is easier to understand.
> Appreciate everyone's discussion. It is very helpful.
>  
>  
> [Jie] Thanks, this aligns with my understanding: it applies to all SPF  
> computations (including Flexible Algorithms) which make use of IGP metric. 
> And  it would be good to replace unreachable with some more accurate 
> description.  
> [Liyan]Thanks.I am also considering this matter and hope to get your advice. 
> Would it be better to use "Infinity Link" instead of " Unreachable Link" for 
> both the content and the title of the draft? 
>  
> Best Regards,
> Liyan
>  
>  
> 邮件原文
> 发件人:Gyan Mishra  
> 收件人:"Dongjie (Jimmy)" 
> 抄 送: Yingzhen Qu  ,lsr  ,lsr-chairs  
> 
> 发送时间:2024-03-01 11:27:32
> 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call - draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 
> - 03/08/24)
> Hi Jie 
>  
> Some answers in-line 
>  
> On Thu, Feb 29, 2024 at 2:31 AM Dongjie (Jimmy) 
>  wrote:
> Hi Yingzhen, 
>  
> I’ve read the latest version of this document and support its adoption.  It 
> is a useful  feature in general to exclude some of the links  from SPF  
> computation. 
>  
> I also have some comments for the authors to consider, they can be solved 
> after the adoption. 
>  
> 1.   I’m not sure the purpose is to advertise an unreachable link in 
> OSPF, from the use cases in the draft, the link is still reachable and  can 
> be used for some services,  just it needs be excluded from normal 

Re: [Lsr] WG AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

2024-03-12 Thread Liyan Gong

Hi Yingzhen,Les and WG,





Thank you. The first version will be updated soon with the name 
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link since the first version name needs to be 
inherited.


The proposed name will be reflected in later versions. Thank you Les for your 
good suggestion. It is more apt.


Any comments are always welcome. 





Best Regards,


Liyan



邮件原文发件人:"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" 收件人:Yingzhen Qu  
,Liyan Gong 抄 送: 
"jie.d...@huawei.com" ,Acee Lindem 
,Gyan Mishra  ,lsr 
,lsr-chairs  ,ketan Talaulikar 
发送时间:2024-03-13 04:27:46主题:RE: [Lsr] WG 
AdoptionCall-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)


Or – if the authors want to consider my comments – replace “unreachable” in the 
name with something more apt – perhaps:


 


“lsr-ospf-max-link-metric”


 





 


   Les


 


 




From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Yingzhen Qu Sent: Tuesday, March 
12, 2024 1:11 PM To: Liyan Gong  Cc: 
jie.d...@huawei.com Acee Lindem  Gyan Mishra 
 lsr  lsr-chairs  
ketan Talaulikar  Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption 
Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)




 


Hi all,


 


The adoption call has ended.



 


There is strong consensus, and all the authors and contributors have replied to 
the IPR call thread, so this draft is now adopted. 



 


Authors, please upload a WG version with name 
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link when the datatracker is open.



 


Please continue the discussion to further refine the draft.



 


Thanks,



Yingzhen






 


On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 7:34PM Liyan Gong  wrote:


Hi Jie,

 

Thank you for your replies. Please see inline with [Liyan].

 

Best Regards,

Liyan

 

 


邮件原文 发件人:"Dongjie \\(Jimmy\\)"  
收件人:Acee Lindem  ,Liyan Gong   
抄 送: Gyan Mishra  ,Yingzhen Qu 
,lsr  ,lsr-chairs 
,ketan Talaulikar   发送时间:2024-03-11 
23:11:49 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption 
Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)


Hi Acee and Liyan, 


 


Please see some replies inline with [Jie] :


 




From: Acee Lindem [mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Sunday, March 10, 2024 
5:37 AM To: Liyan Gong  Cc: Gyan Mishra 
  Dongjie (Jimmy)Yingzhen Qu 
  lsr  lsr-chairs   
 ketan Talaulikar  Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call 
-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)




 


All, 


 


With respect to the naming of the OSPF constants, I think we should go with: 



 


 LSLinkInfinity- 0x 



 MaxReachableLinkMetric - 0xfffe



 


LSLinkInfinity is analogous to LSInfinity. 


 


[Jie]  This is OK to me. 


 


 



 


See inline. 



 


   


 


On Mar 2, 2024, at 06:16, Liyan Gong  wrote:



 

Hi Gyan and Jie,


I am not entirely sure if the suggestions from Ketan in previous email can 
address these two concerns. If not fully addressed, please feel free to let us 
know. 


Overall, this feature is applicable to all FAs, including FA0. The next version 
will further elaborate on the relationships between new features and FAs, as 
well as optimize the use-case descriptions and corresponding name to  reflect 
"Unreachable"  in a way that is easier to understand.


Appreciate everyone39s discussion. It is very helpful.


 


 


[Jie] Thanks, this aligns with my understanding: it applies to all SPF  
computations (including Flexible Algorithms) which make use of IGP metric. And  
it would be good to replace unreachable with some more accurate description. 


 


[Liyan]Thanks.I am also considering this matter and hope to get your advice. 
Would it be better to use "Infinity Link" instead of " Unreachable Link" for 
both the content and the title of the draft? 


 


Best Regards,


Liyan


 

 


邮件原文 发件人:Gyan Mishra   收件人:"Dongjie (Jimmy)" 
 抄 送: Yingzhen Qu  
,lsr  ,lsr-chairs   
发送时间:2024-03-01 11:27:32 主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call - 
draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)


Hi Jie 



 


Some answers in-line 



 



On Thu, Feb 29, 2024 at 2:31 AM Dongjie (Jimmy) 
 wrote:




Hi Yingzhen, 


 


I’ve read the latest version of this document and support its adoption.  It is 
a useful  feature in general to exclude some of the links  from SPF  
computation. 


 


I also have some comments for the authors to consider, they can be solved after 
the adoption. 


 


1.   I’m not sure the purpose is to advertise an unreachable link in OSPF, 
from the use cases in the draft, the link is still reachable and  can be used 
for some services,  just it needs be excluded from normal  SPF calculation. If 
this is correct, it is better the title of the draft and the name of the new 
capability Flag need to be updated to reflect this. 




 


LSLinkInfinity would always indicate the link is unreachable. However, there is 
no real need to advertise it for other services since in these cases the 
advertisement is optional. 



 


[Jie] IMO once LSLinkInfinity is advertised for a link, it would impact all 
services which  rely on SPF 

Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

2024-03-12 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Or – if the authors want to consider my comments – replace “unreachable” in the 
name with something more apt – perhaps:

“lsr-ospf-max-link-metric”



   Les


From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Yingzhen Qu
Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2024 1:11 PM
To: Liyan Gong 
Cc: jie.d...@huawei.com; Acee Lindem ; Gyan Mishra 
; lsr ; lsr-chairs ; 
ketan Talaulikar 
Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption 
Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

Hi all,

The adoption call has ended.

There is strong consensus, and all the authors and contributors have replied to 
the IPR call thread, so this draft is now adopted.

Authors, please upload a WG version with name 
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link when the datatracker is open.

Please continue the discussion to further refine the draft.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 7:34 PM Liyan Gong 
mailto:gongli...@chinamobile.com>> wrote:

Hi Jie,



Thank you for your replies. Please see inline with [Liyan].



Best Regards,

Liyan




邮件原文
发件人:"Dongjie \\(Jimmy\\)" 
mailto:40huawei@dmarc.ietf.org>>
收件人:Acee Lindem  mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com>>,Liyan Gong  
mailto:gongli...@chinamobile.com>>
抄 送: Gyan Mishra  
mailto:hayabusa...@gmail.com>>,Yingzhen Qu 
mailto:yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>>,lsr  
mailto:lsr@ietf.org>>,lsr-chairs 
mailto:lsr-cha...@ietf.org>>,ketan Talaulikar  
mailto:ketant.i...@gmail.com>>
发送时间:2024-03-11 23:11:49
主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
03/08/24)


Hi Acee and Liyan,

Please see some replies inline with [Jie] :

From: Acee Lindem [mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com]
Sent: Sunday, March 10, 2024 5:37 AM
To: Liyan Gong mailto:gongli...@chinamobile.com>>
Cc: Gyan Mishra mailto:hayabusa...@gmail.com>>;  Dongjie 
(Jimmy) mailto:jie.d...@huawei.com>>;  Yingzhen Qu 
mailto:yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>>;  lsr 
mailto:lsr@ietf.org>>; lsr-chairs 
mailto:lsr-cha...@ietf.org>>;  ketan Talaulikar 
mailto:ketant.i...@gmail.com>>
Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call 
-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

All,

With respect to the naming of the OSPF constants, I think we should go with:

 LSLinkInfinity- 0x
 MaxReachableLinkMetric - 0xfffe

LSLinkInfinity is analogous to LSInfinity.

[Jie]  This is OK to me.



See inline.



On Mar 2, 2024, at 06:16, Liyan Gong 
mailto:gongli...@chinamobile.com>> wrote:


Hi Gyan and Jie,

I am not entirely sure if the suggestions from Ketan in previous email can 
address these two concerns. If not fully addressed, please feel free to let us 
know.

Overall, this feature is applicable to all FAs, including FA0. The next version 
will further elaborate on the relationships between new features and FAs, as 
well as optimize the use-case descriptions and corresponding name to reflect 
"Unreachable"  in a way that is easier to understand.

Appreciate everyone's discussion. It is very helpful.


[Jie] Thanks, this aligns with my understanding: it applies to all SPF  
computations (including Flexible Algorithms) which make use of IGP metric. And 
it would be good to replace unreachable with some more accurate description.



[Liyan]Thanks.I am also considering this matter and hope to get your advice. 
Would it be better to use "Infinity Link" instead of " Unreachable Link" for 
both the content and the title of the draft?



Best Regards,

Liyan




邮件原文
发件人:Gyan Mishra  mailto:hayabusa...@gmail.com>>
收件人:"Dongjie (Jimmy)" 
mailto:jie.dong=40huawei@dmarc.ietf.org>>
抄 送: Yingzhen Qu  mailto:yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>>,lsr 
 mailto:lsr@ietf.org>>,lsr-chairs  
mailto:lsr-cha...@ietf.org>>
发送时间:2024-03-01 11:27:32
主题:Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call - draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
03/08/24)
Hi Jie

Some answers in-line

On Thu, Feb 29, 2024 at 2:31 AM Dongjie (Jimmy) 
mailto:40huawei@dmarc.ietf.org>> 
wrote:
Hi Yingzhen,

I’ve read the latest version of this document and support its adoption.  It is 
a useful  feature in general to exclude some of the links from SPF  computation.

I also have some comments for the authors to consider, they can be solved after 
the adoption.


1.   I’m not sure the purpose is to advertise an unreachable link in OSPF, 
from the use cases in the draft, the link is still reachable and  can be used 
for some services,  just it needs be excluded from normal SPF calculation. If 
this is correct, it is better the title of the draft and the name of the new 
capability Flag need to be updated to reflect this.

LSLinkInfinity would always indicate the link is unreachable. However, there is 
no real need to advertise it for other services since in these cases the 
advertisement is optional.

[Jie] IMO once LSLinkInfinity is advertised for a link, it would impact all 
services which  rely on SPF computation based on IGP metric.  Regarding “for 
other services the advertisement is optional”, do you mean other services would 
rely on metric-types other than IGP metric? This is true for 

Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)

2024-03-12 Thread Yingzhen Qu
Hi all,

The adoption call has ended.

There is strong consensus, and all the authors and contributors have
replied to the IPR call thread, so this draft is now adopted.

Authors, please upload a WG version with name
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link when the datatracker is open.

Please continue the discussion to further refine the draft.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 7:34 PM Liyan Gong 
wrote:

> Hi Jie,
>
>
> Thank you for your replies. Please see inline with [Liyan].
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Liyan
>
>
>
> 邮件原文
> *发件人:*"Dongjie \\(Jimmy\\)" 
> *收件人:*Acee Lindem  ,Liyan Gong  <
> gongli...@chinamobile.com>
> *抄 送: *Gyan Mishra  ,Yingzhen Qu <
> yingzhen.i...@gmail.com>,lsr  ,lsr-chairs <
> lsr-cha...@ietf.org>,ketan Talaulikar  
> *发送时间:*2024-03-11 23:11:49
> *主题:*
> Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call-draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
> 03/08/24)
>
>
>
> Hi Acee and Liyan,
>
>
>
> Please see some replies inline with [Jie] :
>
>
>
> *From:* Acee Lindem [mailto:acee.i...@gmail.com ]
> *Sent:* Sunday, March 10, 2024 5:37 AM
> *To:* Liyan Gong 
> *Cc:* Gyan Mishra ;  Dongjie (Jimmy) <
> jie.d...@huawei.com>;  Yingzhen Qu ;  lsr <
> lsr@ietf.org>; lsr-chairs ;  ketan Talaulikar <
> ketant.i...@gmail.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call
> -draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 03/08/24)
>
>
>
> All,
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>
> With respect to the naming of the OSPF constants, I think we should go
> with:
>
>
>
>  LSLinkInfinity- 0x
>
>  MaxReachableLinkMetric - 0xfffe
>
>
>
> LSLinkInfinity is analogous to LSInfinity.
>
>
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> [Jie]  This is OK to me.
>
>
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> See inline.
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> On Mar 2, 2024, at 06:16, Liyan Gong  wrote:
>
>
>
> Hi Gyan and Jie,
>
> I am not entirely sure if the suggestions from Ketan in previous email can
> address these two concerns. If not fully addressed, please feel free to let
> us know.
>
> Overall, this feature is applicable to all FAs, including FA0. The next
> version will further elaborate on the relationships between new features
> and FAs, as well as optimize the use-case descriptions and corresponding
> name to reflect "Unreachable"  in a way that is easier to understand.
>
> Appreciate everyone's discussion. It is very helpful.
>
>
>
>
>
> [Jie] Thanks, this aligns with my understanding: it applies to all SPF
>  computations (including Flexible Algorithms) which make use of IGP metric.
> And it would be good to replace unreachable with some more accurate
> description.
>
>
> [Liyan]Thanks.I am also considering this matter and hope to get your
> advice. Would it be better to use "Infinity Link" instead of " Unreachable
> Link" for both the content and the title of the draft?
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Liyan
>
>
>
>
>
> 邮件原文
> *发件人:*Gyan Mishra  
> *收件人:*"Dongjie (Jimmy)" 
> *抄 送: *Yingzhen Qu  ,lsr   >,lsr-chairs  
> *发送时间:*2024-03-01 11:27:32
> *主题:*
> Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Call - draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link(02/23/24 - 
> 03/08/24)
>
> Hi Jie
>
>
>
> Some answers in-line
>
>
>
> On Thu, Feb 29, 2024 at 2:31 AM Dongjie (Jimmy)  40huawei@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Hi Yingzhen,
>
>
>
> I’ve read the latest version of this document and support its adoption.
> It is a useful  feature in general to exclude some of the links from SPF
>  computation.
>
>
>
> I also have some comments for the authors to consider, they can be solved
> after the adoption.
>
>
>
> 1.   I’m not sure the purpose is to advertise an unreachable link in
> OSPF, from the use cases in the draft, the link is still reachable and  can
> be used for some services,  just it needs be excluded from normal SPF
> calculation. If this is correct, it is better the title of the draft and
> the name of the new capability Flag need to be updated to reflect this.
>
>
>
> LSLinkInfinity would always indicate the link is unreachable. However,
> there is no real need to advertise it for other services since in these
> cases the advertisement is optional.
>
>
>
> [Jie] IMO once LSLinkInfinity is advertised for a link, it would impact
> all services which  rely on SPF computation based on IGP metric.  Regarding
> “for other services the advertisement is optional”, do you mean other
> services would rely on metric-types other than IGP metric? This is true for
> services which use TE paths, while there maybe issue with  Flex Algorithm
> (as discussed below).
>
>
>  Gyan> I agree with you and that is as well stated in the draft
> that MaxLinkMetric (0x) does not exclude the link from SPF and thus
>  requires RI LSA with capability bit set for MaxLinkMetric (0x) for
> link to be excluded from SPF. Maybe “OSPF RI Capability LSA”.
>
>
>
> I think the capability should be LSLinkInfinity support.
>
>
>
> [Jie] This is OK.
>
>
>
>
>
> 2.   In the Flex-Algo use case, if the metric of a link is set to
> MaxLinkMetric (0x) to exclude it from normal SPF computation, while a
>  Flex-Algo is defined to  use the same metric type for 

Re: [Lsr] IPR Poll for draft-gong-lsr-ospf-unreachable-link

2024-03-12 Thread Acee Lindem
No - I'm not aware of any undisclosed IPR.

Thanks,
Acee

> On Mar 8, 2024, at 7:58 PM, Yingzhen Qu  wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> There is an IPR disclosure filed for this draft on 3/8/2024: 
> IPR disclosures (ietf.org)
> 
> Also not all authors have responded to the IPR poll in the adoption call 
> thread, so I'd like to ask all the authors and contributors to answer in this 
> thread. The draft won't progress without answers from all authors and 
> contributors.
> 
> Please state either:
> "No, I'm not aware of any IPR that applies to this draft"
> or
> "Yes, I'm aware of IPR that applies to this draft"
> 
> If so, has this IPR been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules
> (see RFCs 3669, 5378 and 8179 for more details)?
> 
> If yes to the above, please state either:
> 
> "Yes, the IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules"
> or
> "No, the IPR has not been disclosed"
> 
> If you answer no, please provide any additional details you think
> appropriate.
> 
> If you are listed as a document author or contributor please answer the
> above by responding to this email regardless of whether or not you are
> aware of any relevant IPR. This document will not advance to the next
> stage until a response has been received from each author.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Yingzhen

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[Lsr] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-16

2024-03-12 Thread Qiufang Ma via Datatracker
Reviewer: Qiufang Ma
Review result: Almost Ready

Hi, this is my YANG Doctor review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-admin-tags-16, I
marked the review as “Almost Ready” with a couple of comments and questions
below.

(1) For the "ietf-ospf-admin-tags" YANG data model, what is the consideration
for the “advertise-prefixes” data node to be defined as a list with only one
child key inside it? Will this list node be populated with new parameters in
the future? Otherwise I think a simpler definition might be the following: OLD:
augment /rt:routing/rt:control-plane-protocols
/rt:control-plane-protocol/ospf:ospf/ospf:areas/ospf:area
/ospf:interfaces/ospf:interface:
  +--rw admin-tags
 +--rw tags* [tag]
+--rw tag   uint32
+--rw advertise-prefixes* [prefix]
   +--rw prefixinet:ip-prefix

NEW:
augment /rt:routing/rt:control-plane-protocols
/rt:control-plane-protocol/ospf:ospf/ospf:areas/ospf:area
/ospf:interfaces/ospf:interface:
  +--rw admin-tags
 +--rw tags* [tag]
+--rw tag   uint32
+--rw advertise-prefix* inet:ip-prefix

There is nothing wrong to be defined in the current draft (e.g., PYANG won’t
complain), but I think it can be hierarchically reduced this way, thoughts?

(2) For the grouping "prefix-admin-tag-sub-tlvs", it is defined and used to
augment the OSPF YANG data model and the OSPFv3 Extended LSA YANG data model.
There is a list defined inside the grouping definition, with only one child
declared as leaf-list. I am wondering why the type and length are not defined
inside admin-tag-sub-tlv list? Aren’t they part of the admin tag TLV?

(3) The reference info inside the “revision” statement for this draft is
inconsistent with its real title. It is using “RFC : YANG Data Model for
OSPF Prefix Administrative Tags.”, while it should be “RFC : Extensions to
OSPF for Advertising Prefix Administrative Tags”.

(4) There are some list/leaf-list data nodes defined in the YANG data model
with their names defined as plural (e.g., tags, advertise-prefixes,
admin-tags), but the naming convention is to have the list/leaf-list name
singular form. See RFC8407bis
(https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-09.html#section-4.3.1)
for the following: “List identifiers SHOULD be singular with the surrounding
container name plural. Similarly, "leaf-list" identifiers SHOULD be singular.”

(5) There is a YANG tree diagram included in the draft, an informative
reference to RFC 8340 should be added in the draft. See RFC8407bis
(https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-09.html#section-3.4)
for the following: “If YANG tree diagrams are used, then an informative
reference to the YANG tree diagrams specification MUST be included in the
document. Refer to Section 2.2 of [RFC8349] for an example of such a reference.”

(6) It would be good if the tree structure of the YANG module could be defined
in a separate section/subsection, so that readers are able to navigate to the
overview (i.e., tree structure) of the model quickly if they want. Just a
suggestion for the authors to consider.

(7) Please include a note to the RFC editor requesting RFC  and (or
even better, use RFC  for draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang) is
replaced with the RFC number that is assigned to the document.

(8) I see a couple of “TBD” throughout the draft, did the authors leave them
intentional?

(9) I think it would be useful if some example instance snippets of this YANG
data model can be added, either throughout the document or in an appendix. Is
this something the authors would consider to help understand the use of YANG
module?


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