Re: [netmod] [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12 (part 2)

2016-06-06 Thread Dale R. Worley
(This is the second part of my response.) > > > > - section 6.1 > > > > > > > >This section details the rules for recognizing tokens from an input > > > >stream. > > > > > > > > Generally, language definitions intersperse the narrative text with > > > > the relevant grammar definitions.

Re: [netmod] [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12 (part 1)

2016-06-06 Thread Dale R. Worley
(This is the first part of my response, which I am sending seperately to speed things up.) Martin Bjorklund wrote: > wor...@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) wrote: > > Martin Bjorklund wrote on Mon, 23 May 2016 15:43:09 +0200 > > (CEST): > > > wor...@ariadne.com

Re: [netmod] leafref value space and constraint

2016-06-06 Thread Juergen Schoenwaelder
On Mon, Jun 06, 2016 at 02:06:57PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote: > A difficulty I have with the current wording is that it doesn't point > out the crucial fact about leafref that the XPath expression can only > select elements that are instantiations of one particular data node. I > don't know

Re: [netmod] leafref value space and constraint

2016-06-06 Thread Dale R. Worley
A difficulty I have with the current wording is that it doesn't point out the crucial fact about leafref that the XPath expression can only select elements that are instantiations of one particular data node. I don't know XPath, but it seems that that is not a general property of XPath

Re: [netmod] leafref value space and constraint

2016-06-06 Thread Juergen Schoenwaelder
On Thu, Jun 02, 2016 at 04:14:56PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote: > Martin Bjorklund wrote: > > Also, the text needs to mention leaf-lists. This gives: > > > > The leafref type is restricted to the value space of some leaf or > > leaf-list node in the schema tree and optionally further

Re: [netmod] keys in instance-identifiers

2016-06-06 Thread Juergen Schoenwaelder
On Mon, Jun 06, 2016 at 03:43:23PM +0200, Ladislav Lhotka wrote: > > > On 06 Jun 2016, at 15:09, Juergen Schoenwaelder > > wrote: > > > > On Mon, Jun 06, 2016 at 10:13:47AM +0200, Ladislav Lhotka wrote: > >> Hi, > >> > >> section 9.13 in rfc6020-bis says:

Re: [netmod] keys in instance-identifiers

2016-06-06 Thread Juergen Schoenwaelder
On Mon, Jun 06, 2016 at 10:13:47AM +0200, Ladislav Lhotka wrote: > Hi, > > section 9.13 in rfc6020-bis says: > >The syntax for an instance-identifier is a subset of the XPath >abbreviated syntax, formally defined by the rule >"instance-identifier" in Section 14. > > However, the

[netmod] keys in instance-identifiers

2016-06-06 Thread Ladislav Lhotka
Hi, section 9.13 in rfc6020-bis says: The syntax for an instance-identifier is a subset of the XPath abbreviated syntax, formally defined by the rule "instance-identifier" in Section 14. However, the ABNF only allows string literals in key predicates: key-predicate = "[" *WSP