; Martin
Stiemerling; oauth@ietf.org; tsv-...@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23
On 02/15/2012 04:33 AM, Songhaibin wrote:
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area
directorate's ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents
Thanks Haibin.
-Original Message-
From: Songhaibin [mailto:haibin.s...@huawei.com]
Sent: Wednesday, February 15, 2012 1:33 AM
Nits:
1. Section 3.1, paragraph 4, the last sentence is confusing, is it the
authorization server who sends the request to the authorization endpoint?
Or
5. Section 10.6, paragraph 2, second sentence, When the attacker is sent
to.../ When the authorization code request is sent to...
Not sure what you mean.
I mean you may have to change the attacker is sent to... to the
authorization code is sent to
BR,
-Haibin
-Original
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oauth@ietf.org; Martin Stiemerling
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23
-Original Message-
From: Songhaibin [mailto:haibin.s...@huawei.com]
Sent: Friday, February 17, 2012 12:53 AM
To: Justin
Should simple read the attacker's user-agent is sent to.
EH
-Original Message-
From: Songhaibin [mailto:haibin.s...@huawei.com]
Sent: Wednesday, March 07, 2012 6:11 PM
To: Eran Hammer; tsv-...@tools.ietf.org; draft-ietf-oauth...@tools.ietf.org
Cc: tsv-...@ietf.org; oauth@ietf.org;
; tsv-...@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] tsv-dir review of draft-ietf-oauth-v2-23
On 02/15/2012 04:33 AM, Songhaibin wrote:
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's
ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for
their information and to allow them to address any issues
On 02/15/2012 04:33 AM, Songhaibin wrote:
I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for
their information
