Suggestions incorporated.
See attached file
Michael
openindiana-welcome.odt
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Hi Michael
I like it.
The only thing that could be improved is the Enterprise Class Features
Section.
Compared to the other Sections it looks a little Bare bones.
Maybe one or two Sentences per Feature.
Or like Alexander Mentioned you could also use links to other Sites.
Greetings
Till
On
Michael,
I like it overall.
Ken
On Sunday, October 23, 2016 7:55 PM, Michael Kruger
wrote:
This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc...
...
ODT file is attached.
thanks,
Michael
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On 10/23/16 12:35 PM, Andreas Wacknitz wrote:
Hi,
I wonder whether you should also remove one file:
oibuild@dl380g7 components $ ll database/postgresql-jdbc/
total 17
-rw-r--r-- 1 oibuild mac_staff1329 Sep 15 08:15 Makefile
drwxr-xr-x 2 oibuild mac_staff 3 Sep 15 08:15 manifests