Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-27 Thread Alexander Pyhalov
On 10/27/16 02:15 AM, Michael Kruger wrote: On 10/26/2016 01:53 AM, Alexander Pyhalov wrote: On 10/26/16 05:15 AM, Michael Kruger wrote: Whoops...sent an old version. Here is the latest version with the fix. I would move links to the first column (so that ZFS was a link, not File System and

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-26 Thread Michael Kruger
On 10/26/2016 01:53 AM, Alexander Pyhalov wrote: On 10/26/16 05:15 AM, Michael Kruger wrote: Whoops...sent an old version. Here is the latest version with the fix. I would move links to the first column (so that ZFS was a link, not File System and Volume Manager). OK, good idea. Change's

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-25 Thread Alexander Pyhalov
On 10/26/16 05:15 AM, Michael Kruger wrote: Whoops...sent an old version. Here is the latest version with the fix. I would move links to the first column (so that ZFS was a link, not File System and Volume Manager). -- С уважением, Александр Пыхалов, программист отдела телекоммуникационной

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-25 Thread Michael Kruger
Whoops...sent an old version. Here is the latest version with the fix. Michael On 10/23/2016 10:54 PM, Michael Kruger wrote: This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc... Did a quick update of the doc which ships with OI and is presented the first time Firefox is

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-25 Thread Michael Kruger
On 10/25/2016 02:36 AM, Till Wegmüller wrote: Nice I like it. On the ZFS Feature you only have the link and not the Text as Link. I guess thats a typo? Other than that great work thanks. Yes, that was LibreOffice fighting me. Fixed I also added a link to the release notes page on the

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-25 Thread Till Wegmüller
On 25.10.2016 02:16, Michael Kruger wrote: Suggestions incorporated. See attached file Michael Nice I like it. On the ZFS Feature you only have the link and not the Text as Link. I guess thats a typo? Other than that great work thanks. Greetings Till

[oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-24 Thread Michael Kruger
Suggestions incorporated. See attached file Michael openindiana-welcome.odt Description: application/vnd.oasis.opendocument.text ___ oi-dev mailing list oi-dev@openindiana.org https://openindiana.org/mailman/listinfo/oi-dev

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-24 Thread Till Wegmüller
Hi Michael I like it. The only thing that could be improved is the Enterprise Class Features Section. Compared to the other Sections it looks a little Bare bones. Maybe one or two Sentences per Feature. Or like Alexander Mentioned you could also use links to other Sites. Greetings Till On

Re: [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-24 Thread ken mays via oi-dev
Michael, I like it overall. Ken On Sunday, October 23, 2016 7:55 PM, Michael Kruger wrote: This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc... ... ODT file is attached. thanks, Michael ___

[oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-23 Thread Michael Kruger
This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc... Did a quick update of the doc which ships with OI and is presented the first time Firefox is run. Please review and if you have suggestions for what else should be added to this, or would like to see something changed,