Shel Belinkoff wrote:
Forget what I said earlier. Just let the photo stand by
itself. I said too much in my initial post, proving, or at
least giving credence to, the idea that the viewer can be
influenced by too much information.
What difference does it make where the garden is in
Marilyn has a small garden at the front of her small home in a quiet part
of Oakland, California. The garden is a little wild, and that's Marilyn's
preference. She works hard to maintain the wild feel. On a low wall in
the garden are the shoes. They belonged to her dad who has been gone for
Too tight, left right edges over-cropped. No sense of context. Good
tonality though, excellent detail. But the comp is wrong, sorry, but
doesn't live up to a shelbel.
rg
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Marilyn has a small garden at the front of her small home in a quiet part
of Oakland, California.
Thanks for the honest comments. Really appreciate 'em.
I did take make another shot:
http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/paw/shoes04.html
which shows more context. I'll say no more LOL
Shel
Subject: Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden
Too tight, left right edges over-cropped
:29:59 PM, you wrote:
SB Thanks for the honest comments. Really appreciate 'em.
SB I did take make another shot:
SB http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/paw/shoes04.html
SB which shows more context. I'll say no more LOL
SB Shel
SB Subject: Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden
Too
did take make another shot:
http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/paw/shoes04.html
which shows more context. I'll say no more LOL
Shel
Subject: Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden
Too tight, left right edges over-cropped. No sense of context. Good
tonality though, excellent detail
7:03:37 PM
Subject: Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden (A different Perspective)
Very interesting. My eyes are drawn to the odd assortment to the right,
I'm trying to find some meaning in them. Is is random, or intentional?
I don't know. The shot has become more interesting, but I
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